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for Right Turn

by Memme

person KAY-LEE
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so, you are going to write more right? This is a really good story and
I like reading to see what is going to happen between the characters
next. Update soon!
Kay
person DraculUnknown
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! Absolutly love it!
person Earthgirl
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, girl... This is turning out beautiful... I just love how you do the online thing... It\'s wonderful... I\'m anxious to see what happens next, so I promise I\'ll check back soon... :)
person Mashiro
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gaaw! Oh my! I want like more! :D I\'m soo dying to see what happens! And I love Jack, he\'s so adorable! And.. and! And I\'ve yet to write a sentence not ending with an \'!\' Good story! (duh.. :)) /Mashiro
person D-Puppy
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m a bit confused. I\'ll get over it. Are they out in the open now? Is Kyler gay? What\'s going on? *cries*
person V
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, I\'m guessing that Ben\'s secret crush is actually Kyler? If it is, shouldn\'t he know what Kyler\'s voice sounds like by now? (If a guy teased me all the time, I doubt I could ever forget his voice.)
person D-Puppy
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Continue on.