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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. The fact that there were no names just added to the mysterious mood of the story. Keep it up.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay... u need to write more. now.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!?!?!? one fucking chapter?!?! MOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot. It reminds me of a situation i was in one time with my ex\'s best friend. Kind of. You really should continue this.
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Other than some punctuation problems, this seems like the beginning to what could be a very interesting story. I like the whole \"we\'re not supposed to be together, but it\'s hard to turn away\" thing. Especially when the guy says \"tell me to stop\". It\'s kind of sad. Anyway, I\'m interested to see where this goes, so I\'ve added you to my recommended reading list. Hopefully it\'ll develop in to a good story and not in to just shameless PWP. That\'s boring. Good luck!
- Chance
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it\'s really nice story =)
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So much more realistic than a lot of crap on this site! Very well written. Hopefully it\'s not complete, because I\'ll definately be checking back!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done...
It was nearly perfect..the only problem? You haven\'t done the next chapter yet! lol
Get to work or I shall thrash you soundly.
It was nearly perfect..the only problem? You haven\'t done the next chapter yet! lol
Get to work or I shall thrash you soundly.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good. It was really hot. I hope you write another chapter:)
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok...wow. great story...it\'d be nice if you could continue *hint hint* pleeeasssee