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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Honestly? This second chapter was kind of a let down. I was expecting way more angst and regret . Also, I was expecting a much more fleshed out story. This was really thin and the characters don't seem as deep and complicated as they appeared to be in your first chapter. I'll read the next part of this story just to see if it improves. I sincerely hope it does because this premise has so much potential!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good!
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you asked someone else to finish this for you when you're doning such a damn good job yourself. I Can't wait to see where this goes next. Every chapter gets more and more hot! You've got to finish this!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, more! It was really, really well written.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want next chapter!!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is your story and it\' good. you should finsh it and no one else. just take your time. it\'s very good. you hit all my fantacies thats for sure!!!!!!!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You whore...You still haven\'t updated...I\'m going to show up at your place, thrash you soundly, and cuddle w/ my favourite teddy bear in the whole world while you work.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really must agree with everyone else this is a great story and I hope you add on to it ^__^
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this, it was well written, simple yet emotive. the story flowed well and kept my interest.