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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
muy lindo, espero muy pronto la continuacion, ana maria
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far, so good(even with a couple of mistakes here and there). but anyways, hope you update soon!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! One of the best stories I've read on this site and this will be going into my recomended reading list. The first chapter is marvelous, both mystical and sexy as hell. The second chapter lacks a bit, but I think you weren't expecting the reaction your story would get.
I hope you don't abandoned it, but I also hope you don't feel rushed into putting up poor quality chapters, when we know you can do so much more. Please, take your time, but continue! I adore this story!
I hope you don't abandoned it, but I also hope you don't feel rushed into putting up poor quality chapters, when we know you can do so much more. Please, take your time, but continue! I adore this story!
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read the next chapter - I'm hooked!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the better original fics I've found on this site! Keep up the fantastic work. becauase you really have a gift for writing erotica. A good blend of romantic/total sexy.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, how we get to know how they both felt. chapter 2 was good and i'm glad your still writing your story. please update soon.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, it bloody well took you!!! ^_^
But good setup chapter..Suki!!!
Now Slave...get your ass back to the grindstone and give me more! *cracks whips*
But good setup chapter..Suki!!!
Now Slave...get your ass back to the grindstone and give me more! *cracks whips*
schedule
January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Must have MORE!!!!! Great job so far, looking forward to the next installment.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good. Short, but good. I really don't like her ex boyfriend. I hope that he doesn't try anything, like want her just cause she has moved on try to come between them. But if that happens... that would bring drama, and drama always makes it hotter. Anyways, keep up the awesome work. Love it.
schedule
January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for you to continue this. It's a good start. When's the next chapter?