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for Eternity with You

by vanilla

person Ayden
schedule March 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
tää nyt ei sit oo mikää review :D Mä vaan kokeilen toimiiks tää paska
person Ayden
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! finally you updated. and it just take three months. OMG! I was actually surprised to see chapter 5 in your profile. I was so sure to find those four chapters. Maybe I should be dissapointed... then I would complain about this to you at school. Blaah, it wouldn't be nice. It's much nicer to sing a song...:" I feel pwettyy, oh so pwettyy, I feel pwettyy and witty and briight!"
person dramstarelf
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm an undercover Angel...cute sorty so far and I hope you get a really great computer.
person memorietrail
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hope to see more soon i just read it and want more.
person dah
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww.. what a cliffie. First you really hook me and then you say that you are not able to update 'till after x-mas? o.0 Fortunately it's not so far a way but still. You are a cruel person. I really love that demon. :P Bloodred eyes... I wish I had them too .. :D Go Eeva! And don't dare to stop writing this, because if you do, I will find you in the school and torture you painfully, and then I will make you write more.. :P And I'm sure that you recognised me.. ;)
BTW: Your english is very good, and your writing is also excellent. :D Oh boy, if only M.ÄLLI could see this.. :P I bet your english grade would go up all the way to heaven.. ;)
person Walter Dash
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a very good story. I look forward to more.
person Sasha
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, my friend!

Know what, I am very dissapointed in you. And why? \'coz this is really good story, and you tried to take this pleasure for reading your story from me! I was actually surprised that you also have an angel as your character O.o Is that other demon?( I only read first chapter, komenne) And I felt overhelming despair in my heart when I found out that everybody else than me had read this story! Grrr. Okey, I will act like an adult.

Remember when you said your writing is from somewhere? Well, it isn\'t. Stop blaming yourself, it\'s not worth it. You write well, excellent maybe and I didn\'t found any mistakes in your english ( in my level it\'s impossible to find any mistakes) so I enjoyed myseld when reading this. Please update soon :) And in school we can speak about your story, so I don\'t go babbling about myself so much :D

One kysymys o/ If your angel don\'t have sex, how can he make love? THis is very important, you know I don\'t live without yaoi :D:D And you are awfull! You ripped off angels wings! How could you, you heartless bastard! Sob sob sob

Sasha aka Ryuichi aka lonkerohirviön omistaja
person Lin
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! And I must say that the last chapter ended very annoyingly!! I want to know what will happen next! I am sorry to hear about your pc. Same has happened to me also so I know what is it. Pure pain... I hope you\'ll get a new one soon and update this story also!! XD
person Chie
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only had time to read the first chapter, sorry! I had to write German essay (blegh) And it took me 3 hours (well, I wasn\'t really concentrated to it...) and now I should got to do mahs homewprk and it\'s half past midnight and...

.. Anyway, what I wanted to say that It seems great this far. ^___^ Keeep it up my draling. Just warn me when you actually get to the point, because, you know I don\'t want to read that. xD

.... Hnnnn... SHould I join this place too? :D

anyways, take care! ^__^
- Chie/Katty/Fluffy-kami-sama/whatever
person tale
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was brilliant just like I told you! xD I really liked the way you discriped his wings and the agony he is going through...The angel I mean...I\'m eagerly looking forward to the third part of the series.... :D And we shall see if you open your \'toy- box\' XDXDXD..... And remenber I\'m the saintest onion here! *lol*