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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! please keep updating. I love how you got the story and I want to find out where it goes. Good luck with future chapters.
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. Please keep up the good work.
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is really enjoyable. It's well written and kept me hooked so that I read everything posted so far in one sitting. Eric has some really witty lines. I found myself chuckling a few times at his comebacks. Good job! I look forward to more.
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update more it is a very good story.
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally!
New chapters. And good as ever :-) I really like your story and your style. Just one question: Why did you post it under "Humor"? I mean, fantasy or slash would suit much more (or did I miss the humor?) and you will get much more visitors because the humor-section seems kind of dead.
Anyway please keep on writing
Nathaniel
New chapters. And good as ever :-) I really like your story and your style. Just one question: Why did you post it under "Humor"? I mean, fantasy or slash would suit much more (or did I miss the humor?) and you will get much more visitors because the humor-section seems kind of dead.
Anyway please keep on writing
Nathaniel
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, I\'m speechless. As usual, you do a damn good story. I\'m watching this one to see how it comes out.
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the mere suggestion is enough! Glad to see the new chapter. I\'ll be checking regularly, still, as the story progresses. I\'m so glad I have a great story to continue with, awesome job!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so much fun. I like how you\'re slowly increasing the tension as the story progresses. Please keep writing - you\'re doing wonderfully.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable story. Hope you will write more.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this is heating up nicely. Looks like our guys are going to have to come to some decision before night\'s end, and before the barracuda can get her claws into our man David. Looking forward to the next installment!