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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is getting good I cant wait to see what you have instore for your characters please get the next chapter out soon
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was like the sexiest kiss I\'ve ever read. :)
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice Asha :) Great twist. I\'m excited about reading what will happen next.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. It\'s raw, honest, and real. The bedroom scene with Max and Mandie in chapter 5 makes my heart ache. Keep up the good work Asha. :)
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty OK. There\'s a lot of narration and background without much real action going on. I am interested in hearing what happens later. :-)
It\'s kind of frowned upon to hold your story hostage for reviews. Many people won\'t review it simply for that reason (although if some really like it, they might.)
It\'s kind of frowned upon to hold your story hostage for reviews. Many people won\'t review it simply for that reason (although if some really like it, they might.)