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for Umi no Uta

by dragomiremil

person FalconBertille
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning. I like your depiction of life underwater -- eating oysters and sleeping on beds of seaweed. And you definitely capture the energy of small children. \"Didyadidyadidya????\" LOL!

Love,
Falcon
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