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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
open the door/step outside/one foot ahead of the other/the grass between your toes/the air clear and sweet/golden carpet of leaves/close your eyes and breathe/the concrete disappears/the cars rust away/a bear wanders in/he curls up and makes his winter home/open your eyes/has the world changed now?
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
those poems were really good. they had a simple point to get across that they got across successfully and i am into the dark stuff so that was an added bonus. write more ^--^