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I was going to comment on the eun. thing but i guess i was wrong ^^ i am sure Captain Jack and Will will be very excited to here the news ^_____^

Please, continue. After the first chapter, I just couldn\'t stop reading. It\'s compelling and beautiful and sort of familiar. Thank you for writing.

I really like this! ^^ It hasn\'t occured to me until recently to read original stories and it definitley seems worth the effort of finding good ones after reading this one. As for titles i am not sure.... Choral Dissonance? Birthing Pains? though the latter might give the wrong impression ^.~

Paige, thank you for such a nice review! In answer to your question.... I made them up as I was writing. Just stopped in mid-sentence and thought, then checked the meaning on an etymology site and voila! ^__^ Nothing is much predetermined except a very ill-defined plot that fills out as I\'m typing. ^__^

Christine, thank you for the review... I HAD to let you know how much of a chuckle I got out of your misreading of my pen name! Thanks for the laugh this afternoon!

As always, thank you to everyone who takes the time to review. It means a lot and is very much appreciated! ~BLE

number one, I hope you notice that this is on my fav list. It\'s just so well written. Very victorian-era verbose, if you know what I mean and can pardon the alliteration. I find Nathan and Michael very interesting people and I think it\'d be interesting if their backstory could get told some more. Preferably on Michael as we know so little about him. Healing comes through talking about it, right? So michael starts off....As for titles, the wordier, the better. It would fit this story to have something not so pithy, something that has meaning and depth. Maybe with the word \'Ruminations\' in it? I feel like any big string of words that has to deal with coming to terms and regrowth would be a good option. OH! maybe something from Edna St. Vincent Millay\'s \'First Fig\' poem? That is a good poem for this thought probably the after redemption part. anyways, love this and looking forward to the next chapter! Email me when you update!

This is an amazing and beatiful story. Kind of like Nathan. Out of curiosity, did you come up with a name before he was claimed as Nathan? And I love the name Michael. He sounds so sweet and thoughtful. I really love this story. I\'m hoping you\'ll keep writing, and I\'m also hoping you\'ll get more inspiration. :]

Im really liking this, please continue!!!

I lov ed it. I just can\'t stop crying. Thank you for wrighting, and please keep wrighting, I don\'t think I could bear not being able to read this, please continmue. I really do like this.

i really liked this, it was a bit strange yet i enjoyed how detatched you made the character

Ah, the milk of human kindness. You have brought it out from an odd perspective, yet a powerful one. Can a person\'s hope for the kindness of others be so in shreds that when it finally appears, it is not only unrecognizable, but mistaken for something ulterior? Nice twist.