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for Pretty street boy

by ble

person Vanne
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update? 6.6... It's too good to let it at that. What the hell is wrong with those two people!? I'm curious to see if Nathan will be forgiving. C'mon! updateupdateupdate! *does a little dance* please update soon!
person Anjana
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I certainly enjoyed this. I can't wait to see if Nathan and Michael can reconsile their differences. I command you to keep writing.
person Vanne
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you didn't stop adding to this story. I LOVE IT! And yes, those muses that keep us writing are irritating, but they have much love.
person uncouthkitten
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So glad to have come across this story again, it's getting better and better, I really love it. Look forward to the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it was beautiful. Not sure what to say. I'm not sure i really understand it, but the bits i did were good. You've got a good way with words. I cried at some point through it. i cant remember when, just i know that i did.
:)
x
person OR
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. I really like where this story is going and i can't wait until the next chapter :D
person Dismal
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The description is so attentive and your style is horrifyingly beautiful. This story is so much more beneath the surface.
person pet
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is so good! And it should be in erotica; there are more than enough sex refrences for it to count. And good ones too.
person Anon
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t gone farther than the first chapter - but this is quite good! the pace and description and emotion, none of it is rushed or careless, and it had me hooked from the first paragraph. I\'m wondering if you should post this instead under the \"slash\" category. I\'m wondering which is more available. The \"erotica\" is usually het.

I\'m intrigued and quite caught up in the storytelling so far, so have to go read the rest!
person ble
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks once again everyone for reviewing! I\'m hoping to post another chapter soon, but you know... I\'m not going to force it; thank you for being patient with me! ^_^

Here\'s the link to my information source on castrates if anyone is interested:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Castration

The bit on medical consequences, third paragraph, is where I found the pertinent info. I did take some creative license in terms of Nathan\'s sex drive, however. This is a fiction, though, so I\'m allowed. *very big grin* ~_^ Thanks again for reading and reviewing! ~BLE