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person Memme
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say... I\'m firmly entranced by Ryan. He\'s so adorable and marvelous and wonderful. :)

You\'re really zooming through this! I\'m amazed the amount of work you\'re putting into the stories. Beautiful chapters, both of them! And Ryan\'s take is just so cute. :) It\'s been a fun ride so far!
person Memme
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! Another beauitful set of chapters! I sure love Ryan and Lee... what a cute couple. But on to other things... you\'ve got a good handle on the fact that things are rough for outed teens. Poor Kevin is holding his own just barely. (Someone needs to teach that boy some Kung FU! *L*) And I laugh about the Lee thing, because he seemed far less delicate than Kevin in your introduction of him. Still, I could see Ryan remaining overprotective. He knows, more than most, just how cruel some people can be.

Beautifully done. Can\'t wait to read the next installment!
person Memme
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*L* I have to say... I like how Lee isn\'t a broken person in this. They\'ve all got their baggages, but his seem more normal than overdone. And not that I don\'t like the baggage of the others! It\'s just nice that Ryan doesn\'t have to \"save\" Lee like the other heros have had to be saved. It\'s almost like a normal relationship. :) Cute!
person Memme
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh marvelous! We get to find out about Ryan! (My fave C! *S*) I can\'t wait to see what happens next! Beautifully constructed and the way they take it slow, that Ryan doesn\'t just jump into things but he\'s also confident enough to be amused and excited.. that\'s neat!
person Memme
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Been reading both stories together.. what fun!!! And I\'m intrigued as to Ryan. I wished there were more of his story, now - that they\'d followed up on finding out whatever else was a bother to him.

And that\'s marvelous! You\'ve left room for sequels! *L*

Truthfully though... beautiful story.. both of them. With some really loveable characters. Nice job and I\'ll have to read more of your stuff! :)
person cynlie
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*evil grin* this is taking an interesting toll ;D thank you for writing again!
person zoshia
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww! what a happy chapter, they all seem like such good friends and i love it! they fit so perfectly together! damn that tanya! haha, yay randomness!!! k, well, keep it up!
person Zoshia
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was such an action packed chapter! awesome!!!! man..... that teacher rocks!!! and tanya really needs to die a very painful and bloody death involving spoons. : D keep it up!
person Zoshia
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice ending, good chapter but....um.... what other crisises?!?!!? when do i get to know!?!? i really love all the other people in this story and i really want to hear their stories, so hopfully i\'ll get to...? haha please keep it up! : D
person zoshia
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALY! Kevin understands! thank god! i thought it would never happen! haha.
splendid chapter, keep it up!