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person Alice
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sensual... Eager to see more of these two playing! ;)
person Kayla
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a sweet story, I love it! I can\'t read slash novels from public places like the bookstore because my parents wouldn\'t approve, actually, they wouldn\'t let me read them. So, having such good original stories online is great! I don\'t really like Kevin, it seems to be he should be a little more grateful to Brian, who put his life, future, and even his virginity on the line just for him. That\'s sacrifice and I think Kevin shouldn\'t have tried to set Brian up and actualy try to force him and Matt up. Then he doesn\'t tell his brother anything, and it just strikes me as a little ungrateful. I love the sweet relationship between Matt and Brian and the way Matt\'s so gentle with him. It\'s great. Please update soon!
person cynlie
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! i loved this chapter very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! holy crap, yay for angst and history on brian\'s past! ^^ *huggle* you are my savior hehe. PLEASE KEEP THIS UP!!!! you\'re a very talented writer and i love you for your constant effort :D
person Zoshia
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY FOR A LOVING FAMILY FOR BRIAN! I\'m sooooo happy
person cynlie
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! that was great, more history about people :D i love it. I\'m just wondering, how did brian take care of himself when only kevin was there? did kevin help brian at all when they were still in the old home and gary was being evil to brian? i would love to see a chapter or something on that...^^ just curiosity heh. can\'t wait for the next chapter! thank you!!! dont stop!
person Zoshia
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like Grant and Cody, they\'re good characters! YAY! good chapter
person Dani
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!!! I can\'t believe you update everyday! Keep it up. I love the characters, especially Matt. I think it would add to the story by flashing back to before when he was still bullying Brian. Makes that fact that he now cares for him a bit more sweet. Keep writing, I\'ll be back tomorrow!
person Zoshia
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH THANK THE LORD!!!! I couldn\'t be happier right now, that was a good chapter. tehe. rock on Cody too! oh yeah!!!
person cynlie
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!! YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!! GO YOU!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! simply love it ^^ yaaaaaaaaay thank you for another amazing chappie! xD
person Zoshia
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I hope Brian calling matt his boyfriend means things are moving along, hahaha
great chapter!
love always