rate_review Reviews

SNAAARRRRRRRRR! That was magically delicious. Like frosted lucky charms...^_^ A few grammar issues... changing what should be \'to\' to \'too\' and a few places where the letter order was flippled like tihs. Other than that, I was gonna be like, \"No, not the whole pretty boy got raped cliche!\" but then I was like, \"But by a drag queen? That\'s different...tehehehehe.\" Also, you could take a little longer to develop the characters and plot if you wanted, like tell about when Atherial first started being stalked or something, and give a lil background on Attaken, but you might do that in the later stories, I\'ll have to check them! They are very deliecious sounding characters... I must draw a picture! Vunderful job! XD

-shivers- Ok..this one\'s gonna get a bit of attention tonight. I\'m stuck on this fic and I swear, it\'s gonna be a thousand reads before I\'m tired of it. They\'re all so lovely hun. I can\'t wait for the coming parts. -giggles-