rate_review Reviews

Oops, I forgot to add this to my review of Chapter Two... This line cracked me up >>> \"Her private vocal instructor was a Nazi, she was convinced. The woman had to have been born with that stick up her ass, because this sort of behavior could only be the result of a lifetime of practice.\" Sounds like a couple of professors of mine... lol

Whoop! That was a quick update, and a first kiss to boot! lol Nice chapter, here, I loved the fast food buffet. Very original and creative. Brent seems like such a complete sweetheart, I wish he was real and there were many more of him running around... It was also nice to see a little more of Mike in this chapter. I\'m sure he\'s gonna cause some trouble somewhere along the way. Great description on the kiss, very tasteful and real. I can\'t wait to see what happens next!

Wow, you should have way more reviews for this. I know I\'m impressed. Funny, sweet, interesting... All the things I look for in a story. lol I LOVED this line>>> \"Her heart was now beating madly in her chest, and she willed it to slow down. \'Fuck off,\' it responded, beating even harder as his arm brushed against hers a little.\" hehe Gotta love sexual tension, eh? Anyhoo, I\'m glad Sam ended up hooking up with Brent rather than Mike. As soon as he was introduced, I liked him better. Let\'s just hope he doesn\'t turn out to be an asshole, too... Ok, on to the the next chapter. :o)

this first chapter was really great. keep up the great work. cant wait to read chapter two. and the other chapters.

Wow, it\'s so weird to review something and not have to point out errors. I have to start by saying the standard: that I really enjoyed this and hope you update soon. I like the way, so far, everyone seems to be geniunely nice/likable as opposed to the usual \"Let\'s make the new girl cry!\" game that most people want their characters to play. I swear I had more to say when I was reading. *Sheepish*