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oh god the tension! who will she choose. frankly, if i were Sam i would drop Brent on his ass. not that i\'m making any judgements about where the story is or should be going. I\'m just along for the wonderful ride calling them as i see them. I love Mike. He is such and interestign character. Thank you so much. Can\'t wait to read more.

i love your characters. They seem so real. You have a very fluid writing style and I really am enjoying this story. Please continue it.

Mike is so adorable. I love all the different sides to his personality, he\'s such a dynamic character. Unlike Brent who is becoming more and more annoying with every chapter you write. Prick. Augh... Anyway, nice job, and I wish you luck on the next chapter.

P.S. : Sorry for the short review, my new chapter is driving me insane, and I need to get it finished. :o)

So Brent\'s not perfect, after all! I liked this chapter greatly; I think your character\'s interactions are extremely realistic. I can\'t wait for the next installment!

Oooooh... Brent is pissing me off. How can Sam STAND a possesive jerk like that?! And HOLY CRAP! Mike is a virgin? Wow. Wasn\'t expected that. lol I can\'t believe I am the ONLY one reviewing this. You should think about posting on Fictionpress.com I post my stuff on there, and I have nearly 400 reviews on FFY. Let me know if you need any help setting up an account. I\'d be happy to help. Great job so far, and I hope Sam drops Brent\'s lame ass soon. lol

Wow, and holy begeezus. lol That was... intense. I have a bad feeling about Brent. I don\'t think he\'s a \'wonderful\' as he appears, and I have to wonder if he\'s just what he said he wasn\'t. Just in it for the sex. By the way, what the freak is sandalwood and what does it smell like? lol I see that word constantly, but I have no idea what it is. Anyway, good chapter. I\'m liking Mike more and more, and Brent less and less. I guess I\'ll just have to wait and see where you go with this... :o)

I love the relationship you\'ve got brewing between Sam and Brent, so sweet and innocent. What\'s more interesting though, is what\'s up with Sam and Mike? Do I foresee a hurdle in our young romance here? Great start, keep going!

Oooooh.... Intriguing.... Maybe Brent isn\'t the sweetheart I thought he was at first, and Mike is the real hero of this story? That would be an awesome twist. I\'m beginning to like Mike more anyway. Possessive guys who call twenty times in the same hour are creepy anyway. lol My kitten is trying to devour the couch. Anyway, nice job, and I hope my \'shameless plug\' helped with getting you some reviews. The best of luck, and update soon! ;o)

P.S. : Oh, and congrats on finding the Christmas Story reference. You made feel all happy and squishy inside. lol

I just read the first three chapters, and I really enjoyed them. You have an excellent pace and the characters all seem very natural. Additionally, the kiss was very sweet and tender. I\'m definitely interested in seeing where this story goes.

It\'s a travesty that well written, interesting stories like this go unnoticed on this site. A TRAVESTY I tell you! Anyway, nice second chapter. The more I learn about Sam, the more I like her. She\'s quick and witty, and who can help but like someone like that, ya know? Oh, and a Utopias and Dystopias class?! That would be so much fun! I wish they offered classes like that at my college, dammit. But no, I get stuck with classes like World History and Oral Communications... Sam\'s teacher for that class sounds awesome, by the way. He reminds me of my English teacher from my senior year of high school. She used to look like she was in pain every time a student made stupid comment or asked an inane question, too. It was highly amusing, needless to say. As for Mike... He might be a player, but he does seem like an ok guy. Sam just needs to make a mental note NOT to fall into bed with him. lol Ok, enough ranting. I do hope you continue plugging away at this fantastic story, despite the lack of response from the ignorant masses, because I for one, am greatly anticipating your next chapter. I will also be recommending your story to everyone I know, so don\'t make us wait too long for your next update. -poke poke- :o)