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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you finally updated! I love this story and I can tell you've lost the luster for it. You can tell it in this chapter. Some advise, if you're not in the mood to write then don't otherwise it will ruin the story. We've waited two years already we can wait some more. Don't get me wrong I don't want to wait another minute but if you're heart isn't in then don't bother.
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now this chapter had it's luster!
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: Wow! I have no idea what to think! This is a wonderful story so far!
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know this isn't too helpful, but there isn't really anything that I don't like about this story! I'm very eager I read what comes next!
~L
p.s. I'd post a longer review, but I have to go to work :(
~L
p.s. I'd post a longer review, but I have to go to work :(
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I just read your story so far. I loved it. It's smart...which is something that seems to be rare on this site. Sam is such a great character, dynamic and relatable. The plot with Mike and Brent was well written. I honestly didn't know who I wanted to root for. But I love Mike and Same together. Lol, I also love that they were going to discuss The Republic in one of their study sessions...it reminded me of my Critical Theory class I took last semester and My study group I had...although it was nothing like in your story...mine was a bunch of catty girls. Yikes. Anyways, great story and well written. Just wanted to drop you my two cents!!
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you need to update or give the story to someone else cuz ya its really good and should be contined and ya i want a LEMON BETWEEN MIKE AND SAM!!!!! AND PAUL AND KAREN!!!!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read this yet but you review/comments are good. Plus your foreward caught my attention. I'll going to read it now.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you! this chapter is even better without all the drama that turned the plot complex. or should i say, more complex than it already is. I can\'t wait for Sam and Mike to actually get together. Please don\'t keep us all in suspense. update soon.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, good. I\'m so glad you decided not to make her pregnant. I was actually kind of disappointed in that turn of events. Good luck with the upcoming chapters!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t want it to beover between sam and mike. it makes me sad to think that thier relationship is over even before it began. can\'t wait to read more. i\'m awfully sad now though. Please make it ok.