schedule
December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update!
schedule
September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...I really like the title you picked. You plunged me straight into the action. She\'s going from the frying pan into the fire, it seems. Can\'t wait for more. I\'ll keep an eye on you.
schedule
September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning! The action was very exciting, and quite well described -- I always have trouble writing action scenes, so I admire someone who does them well. And it definitely made me want to learn more about the girl. I look forward to the next chapter.
Love,
Falcon
Love,
Falcon