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for Belittled Kid

by Christianity

person The Dark Child [Am a girl
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update asp thanks
person Jack16
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My Kei is so smart, I\'m so happy she\'s smart. Not so smart though...
I hope she didn\'t read that, I can\'t wait for the next chapter, Lezbian! Reese is a girl name....
I suppose it could fit a guy too. I love you, Kei!

P.S. LEZBIANS ROCK!!!
P.S.S I hate homosexuals though, that is just sick man!
person The Dark Child [Am a girl
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey my favourite is Jack.
I guess it\'s causes he has a hard life and he\'s trying to make it through.
But me and my friend were on the compter she didn\'t even know she could review.
I don\'t know when you updated sorry if you\'ve been waiting
Up date soon

THANKS
person love child
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good! i didn\'t really think i\'d like it, but i did. i\'m glad i read it. are u gonna give us ne more background on Jack\'s life. like maybe how he got to be where he is...i\'m just curious. keep up the good work and update soon! nothing irks me more than a writer who doesn\'t update perfectly good stories, i understand that u most likely have a lot to do, but if u decide that u don\'t wanna write this story nemore could u put an author\'s note saying that? if u don\'t i\'ll probably keep checking ur story everyday to see if its updated and if it never get updated then it\'ll crush my hopes...Write soon!!^_^
person Jack16
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey baby! I like this story. Is Cecy suppose sta be you or what?
O yea, call me, a\'ight.
person The Dark Child [Am a girl
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for talking about me .
I\'m gald you like my name.
I L O V E T H I S S T O R Y
Please please update take me saying please special N O T
I\'m not special but it\'s cool talked about me and gald you made it extra dramic[sp]
I take drama in school belive it or not. update soon

THANKS
person The Dark Child [Am a girl
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM


I liked it a lot please please please update thanks