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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please, please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love, love, love the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i have a heavy pinky. But, yeah, I think this is seriously one of yall's bests.
Love, love, love the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i have a heavy pinky. But, yeah, I think this is seriously one of yall's bests.
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your storyline =]
the pace youre taking..and many plot twists and the characterizations are wonderful!
im looking forward to the next update, definitely
like you say..hopefully the next update will not take you too long ^^
the pace youre taking..and many plot twists and the characterizations are wonderful!
im looking forward to the next update, definitely
like you say..hopefully the next update will not take you too long ^^
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic; it's exactly what I was looking for in the Originals section, so thank you for writing it and sharing it and I hope you'll update soon.
You probably don't appreciate this kind of review that much, but I can't think of any criticisms for your story - the pacing is perfect and the twists of the perceptions of the characters are interesting and unexpected or at least well written. The characters are believable in their situations and their impressions of each other grow appropriately; so yes, nothing I can argue with.
You probably don't appreciate this kind of review that much, but I can't think of any criticisms for your story - the pacing is perfect and the twists of the perceptions of the characters are interesting and unexpected or at least well written. The characters are believable in their situations and their impressions of each other grow appropriately; so yes, nothing I can argue with.
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE!!! I BEG OF YOU...Your story is too good to waste!!!!!!!!!.........................And yes, I have no life, but that\'s besides the point...HURRY!! PLZ!!
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I love this story. It\'s great and I can\'t wait till you update it.
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June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey guys it\'s me again, you know the whiny person who absolutely LOVES your story and has been suffering in misery without any updates of it. have you abandoned it? please, don\'t do this! try to finish your story, I BEG you. it\'s really too good to be abandoned like this. and believe me, i am not the only one to be waiting and siitiing on the edge of the seat every time i check AFF for the updates. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE have mercy and update your strory. please!!!
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Chapter 13 was great! Make mroe soon please! I was almost disappointed that nothing happened between Dain and John, but yeah... Reily should have him all to himself anyways!!! Yay, so it can all work out...right?!? Please update again real soon you guys!! I love this fic!
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You don\'t see quality like this very often on AFF. <3 Keep writing!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww, that's so sad...and sweet. ARe they EVER going to get together?? I hope so soon.!! I'll try to remember to check ^_^
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a great ch well worth the wait. i really love this story! i was scared for a sec there you were going ot have john get dain. I can't wait to see what happens the next morning. Update soon!