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Yay! a new update since I was here last time! I love it :D
Thet was just so hawt! They'll come together right?! I hope they do!:D

shit, this was a really god and different story. I've gotten a bit tired of stories about one bottom who alwways cry and is shy. Ok, Dainton cries and is shy but not in that feminine, weak way as in so many other stories. I just like him.
And Reilly. I like the fact that you write about his thought about his feelings for Dainton. I think he reacts in a realistic way.
Oh yeah, when Dainton was daydreaming about him and Reilly having sex I was like *whatta?? You gotta be kidding me!?* before I relised he was daydreaming. Hehe...
I can't find the right words to describe what I think about this story except I love it and I'm really looking forward to the next update.

Hi,
I just wanted to tell you two things.
Firstly, merry Christmas and thank you for writing this story.
Secondly, I just want to let you know I miss this story terribly. I know you updated in October (and it's not that long ago, compared to your previous update) but I (and I suppose not only I) would be really happy to be able to read another chapter.
So ... please, update.

This is kinda out of left field, since I already reviewed the fab. update for this fic (god, you know I adore this), but seeing an update for VOF somehow jogged my memory. I meant to comment how it really annoyed me to see the above review by C. Nightt. It's cool to offer up honest author input and all, but it gnawed at me not to see a single other encouraging review from this person (and maybe I'm just missing it). Calling you guys irresponsible is so steeped in irony, it made me grin a little..I think bitching and moaning about the lack of an update, when no previous positive input, anything whatsoever, has been offered just about tops the charts of 'pot, have you met kettle?'.

Not to be a nag, but readers..if you love the story enough to miss it when there's an update hiccupp, freaking TELL the authors you're enjoying it. How the hell else are they supposed to know you're reading? The hit count could be from some idiot's bookmark :)

Love you guys, and just felt compelled to make sure that you know how appreciated you and your fics are! Am looking forward to reading the updates for VOF that somehow slipped under my nose. Keep up the outstanding work!

THANKYOUOHGODTHANKYOUFORUPDATING!
I adore this fic and its characters and I was really worried that you had given it up. So thank you and please keep writing!

God, I love you, I love this, PLEASE update!

This story's great! I hope you update again soon

i'm so glad you updated i love your story can't wait to read more

OMG!OMG!!OMG!!! At last! You guys made my day and rocked my world today! I was just flicking through the sites I usually visit, tough I didn't hope for anything. To tell the truth I lost any hope of ever reading a new chapter of your story again. But when I spotted 'Perseverance', I squealed (behaviour hihly inappropriate for a public place I was sitting in - you know the looks I received ... And I couldn't NOT read the chapter immediately. It was so great! Finally Ry decided to act upon his attraction towards Daint! And the scene between them was so hot! But I like the fact that they didn't say anything about their feelings for each other - this would be too early. So this is the thing we're all going to look forward to. As far as the long wait is concerned - if you weren't the people who write the most wonderful story ever (and I mean it, I have read thousands of different stories, both original and fanfiction ones, and your story is THE ONE I consider the best), I would kill you without remorse for making me - US (all those people who are hooked to your story) wait for over half a year! Please, don't do it again, you have no idea how painful it is to wait for another chapter of your story, to check it again and again to no avail?
So please update soon and count me in for reviewing all the chapters that you will ever post. (I am not a baboon - I review) See ya!

Ohhh the tension! It's been webbed away just a little, now that they done stuff..But I don't think that it means they're skipping into the sunshine. Ry is pretty confused. I know he cares about Dam,but I don't think he'll be accepting to the relationship factor as much as the 'getting off' factor. And Dam doesn't seem like a open-relationship sort of guy (ahhh the foil-ness of characters~!) I like how John was like 'mmm baby, your 18!' and then 'wtf? 17, waaay too young!' lol I know he's just irked about the illegal-jailbait-ness, but it just made me laugh that he said that there was too much of an age gap when if Dam was a year older, he'd be fucking him into the sofa.

As for that spacy-sex scene a couple of chapters back...wow! That was soo hot... I was thinking, did he fall asleep or something, cause it came out of nowhere, but I wasn't one to complain. Then the whole spacing out thing clicked. I usually don't like dream-sex scenes cause it just isn't a real part of the story, but your spacing off sequence just seemed totally realistic and made me eager for more.

Anyway, lovin it!