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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uh, this chapter is sooo hot!
Reilly sure figured out fast what he wants from Dainton :)
i hope this relationship works for both of them
Reilly sure figured out fast what he wants from Dainton :)
i hope this relationship works for both of them
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 15
Hi, lime green and tangerine,
Wow, what a nice surprize! Thank you, guys, this fic is one of my favourites on AFF. It's been a while, so I went ahead and reread it again. It's better every time, I swear:)
I like dialogue between main characters, very natural and real. The plot development is perfect, not too slow and not rushed. It's believable.
Something tells me that Dainton's mum is not coming back. They kept her for a long time already. We havn't seen her since chapter... eight, was it? She is stil kept for observation. Is he almost 18, though?
Last chapter was smocking hot and ended in a cliff! Awww!
I wonder how you guys are writing this fic together? Each chapter together or toggle them? The plot is so good, everything just falls into place. Really good story, I am impressed:) Just brilliant!
Thank you
Hi, lime green and tangerine,
Wow, what a nice surprize! Thank you, guys, this fic is one of my favourites on AFF. It's been a while, so I went ahead and reread it again. It's better every time, I swear:)
I like dialogue between main characters, very natural and real. The plot development is perfect, not too slow and not rushed. It's believable.
Something tells me that Dainton's mum is not coming back. They kept her for a long time already. We havn't seen her since chapter... eight, was it? She is stil kept for observation. Is he almost 18, though?
Last chapter was smocking hot and ended in a cliff! Awww!
I wonder how you guys are writing this fic together? Each chapter together or toggle them? The plot is so good, everything just falls into place. Really good story, I am impressed:) Just brilliant!
Thank you
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another chapter added to a story i thought was dead? i'm so excited! if you guys keep going at this rate i may have a heart attack. i have to say that of all the authors i read from regularly, you guys are ranked in the top three. it's kind of a three-way tie because i can't decide, but that's kind of like being in first anyways. so yay for you. to sum up this chapter in one word: hot. it was about damn time anyways and poor dainton needs something to make him feel loved. however, i do get the feeling that if reilly does fuck up somehow, (and i get the feeling he will) it's going to be the angst-fest from hell. although probably nowhere near as bad as bleeding hearts cauterized and caustic touch buring. sometimes, something will remind me of illkit and it still makes me sad. part of the downside to remembering just about everything you read i suppose. if you guys keep on turning out great stuff like usual, i'll be happy forever. you guys should get paid for this. not that i want to be charged or anything. bbut you could get paid. if you ever write a book let me know so i can buy it.
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
Seriously guys ... nice to see this story up after such a long time!! You have no idea how happy I was to see it today, I seriously gave all my friends a heart attack, strting to positively scream with enthusiasm! And thank you for having mercy on us finally! I was slowly going desperate I will never see the story again. So thanks a lot!
Now the review.
So, the talk of the feelings has been done; and a significant progress has been made as well. That's good for the both of them, Ry and Dainton. Lots of learning how to cope with relationship ahead of them. The scene was hot ^__^ and the cliffie ... haha, was simply great. Making us want to read on but seriously, if you're gonna update in six (or eight) months from now ... Please, update sooner! Do you realize that in the span of a year you updated TWICE??!! October and now? Please, don't make us wait so long, it's seriously killing me inside ...
Still loving this story, still thinking it's the best story ever I have had the pleasure to read. Keep up great work.
teeta
Seriously guys ... nice to see this story up after such a long time!! You have no idea how happy I was to see it today, I seriously gave all my friends a heart attack, strting to positively scream with enthusiasm! And thank you for having mercy on us finally! I was slowly going desperate I will never see the story again. So thanks a lot!
Now the review.
So, the talk of the feelings has been done; and a significant progress has been made as well. That's good for the both of them, Ry and Dainton. Lots of learning how to cope with relationship ahead of them. The scene was hot ^__^ and the cliffie ... haha, was simply great. Making us want to read on but seriously, if you're gonna update in six (or eight) months from now ... Please, update sooner! Do you realize that in the span of a year you updated TWICE??!! October and now? Please, don't make us wait so long, it's seriously killing me inside ...
Still loving this story, still thinking it's the best story ever I have had the pleasure to read. Keep up great work.
teeta
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG UPDATE!. I remember ages ago reading this,and then the updates stopped lol. Im glad this story has been updated.
If that cliffy is anything to go by, im sure ill Love the next chapter =p
If that cliffy is anything to go by, im sure ill Love the next chapter =p
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's so sad how this story of yours has me transfixed to the point where I bite my nails waiting for an update, literally gasp when you *do* finally update and go back to it every now and then so I can re-read it all over again. The build-up suspense and interaction between those two boys really is gripping.
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear God, I am ecstatic over your update!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter, (preferably sooner please).
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like a lot your story!! it is so sweet ;)
keep updating and good luck with the inspiration
keep updating and good luck with the inspiration
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, this story is sooooo good. i love it. plese update soon. i cant wait to read more. you guys are amazing