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for Perseverance

by limegreenandtangerine

person Margaret W.
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg.....thatz cold!...poor dainton....lol......well...he\'s gotta be embarrassed beyond all reason that he daydreamed that...in front of Reilly no less.This story is awesome...hope you update it again very soon,and to let u know,i don\'t read original stories that often but i really like yours!...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
person Jayden
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it love it love it love it!!!!
person Heather
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo-hoo! Two chapter update! (Thank you, thank you, thank you!)

Now that that\'s out of the way...

These two chapters were absolutely great. Each time I think the situation with Dainton and his mother can\'t get any more miserable, it does. Another little piece of my heart shattered after reading the part at the hospital. I knew it wouldn\'t be a happy meeting, but sometimes it\'s hard for me to remember that Dainton\'s mom isn\'t stable. I can\'t stop myself from feeling so much anger at her harsh treatment of him. I know her reaction to seeing her son is not her fault, but it doesn\'t make the words and her treatment of Dainton any less terrible. I really do wonder if their situation will ever be improved. I\'m really hoping for a happy ending for this story, but I guess only you know that.

But I will say that I am so extremely happy that Dainton finally broke down and told Reilly. With Dainton being so high-strung and on edge, it\'s no wonder that it didn\'t take much prodding on Reilly\'s part before he finally let loose. And Reilly...aww...he is really turning out to be one sweet guy. You know he cares deeply about Dainton, and it\'s obvious that Dainton cares for Reilly. But they are in DENIAL! I wonder if Reilly will ever be able to come to terms with his own sexuality.

And that kiss...I am such a sucker for sweet moments like that. I like how it wasn\'t rushed. They both took their time exploring, feeling each other out, seeing how far to take it. I absolutely melted at that point. And then when Reilly asked Dainton later that night if he would have kissed anyone, a part of me really wanted Dainton to tell him no. I wanted him to say that he wanted to kiss Reilly, but I also love the awkwardness of their burgeoning relationship. It\'s cute and sexy, and downright touching at times, and I love it!

So, enough rambling. Looking forward to more fabulous chapters!



Reilly and Dainton are soo cute...but soo in denial.
person D=Puppy
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m a huge ass fan of this fic. So please continue and gotta say it\'s going greatly. Dain\'s ma still reminds me of mine. Well....hope the two get together soon. Cuz it kills me when they are like on that borderline!
person roxierose13
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I like this a lot. I do really like the names you\'ve chosen too ^_^ I hope they get together soon! Please, update and email me when you do please? That would be great!
person Mu-chan the Vampyr King
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awe.

Tell Ry to get over himself!
person Kikvws
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! This is still my absolute fav fic of yours...and I love \'em all! Keep up the outstanding work!
person Jayn
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor guy! He really needs a break! I hope he\'ll be happy soon. PLEASE update soon!!
person Mu-chan the Vampire King
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your grammar needs work, but very good.
person D-Puppy
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Could you possibly have the mother die. I think that would be a nice thing for Dain. Feels remorse yet relived and feels horrible that he\'s feeling relief from her death.