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oh my gosh that day dream was so f* hot! I practically wet my pants. This whole story is great. I am so happy that you guys have decided to write this. The flow is great the progression of the relationship is beleivable and the doubts are so over the top and there aren\'t any gratuitous sex scenes. Of course the current eye candy doesn\'t count! Keep up the great work!

WhAT THE FUCK!!!!!???!?!? No!!!!!!!!! update

OH YOU BITCHES!!! HAHAHA!!! that was so wrong, but I am sooooo lovin the story...Dainton is so luvable

.... that was such a teasing chapter. I KNEW something was up from the start, but Dain having such kinky fantasies? *snicker*

Yeah... wonder how he\'s going to explain THAT little daydream to Reilly...

One’s lifeline shows how much energy one has, not how long one will live.

\"…You have a long life line…\" “…an announcement about his lifeline…” Pick one.

LOL! I knew it had to be Dain\'s fantasy! Ouch - would have been really painful without the lube \'n all... but anyways: great chapter! Seems like all of my favorite stories have been updated today. Thanks and keep writing! ^_^

\"...Dainton, what the fuck are you on? You\'re just sitting there, staring...\"

I almost cracked up at that point. Not because those lines are exactly funny, but I just can imagine the response. Dainton telling Reilly he was fantasizing about getting fucked into the couch-by none other than himself-may not go over too well. But then again, with Reilly\'s growing attachment to Dainton (and his growing awareness of his attraction), you never know...

Anyways...lovely chapter, as usual. Not to sound like a complete sap, but I\'m glad that it was only Dainton\'s fantasy. With the way Reilly is really beginning to care for Dainton, I just couldn\'t imagine their first time together being like that. I like how Reilly was finally allowed in to Dainton\'s home and his reaction to seeing the bloodstains. He knows now how close he came to losing his new friend, and now I think he will come to cherish his relationship with Dainton, even more so than he already has. It was a reality-check moment for Reilly. I like the way you guys handled it-not a complete meltdown on Reilly\'s part, but emotional enough to show that he understood the severity of the situation. Kudos to you.

Well, normally I could ramble on and on about how much I love this story, but I\'m too tired this morning to write a proper review. But, great chapter, looking forward to more, and later...

Oh GOD I wanna make fucking love to you....

(please email me when you update this..!!!)

I can\'t wait!!!!!

omg that was hot but what the? was it like a dream sequence or something?? awww! pls make the them actually do it soon lol they need to relieve that tension!

He imagined that!! OMG. I feel embarressed for him if he did... But it\'ll help him understand his feelings better. WANT MORE!! PLEASE update soon!!