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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god.i love this story.update.its,,,so real. :)
i feel sad everytime dain is.i just want to scoop him up in my arms and take care of him.lol
i feel sad everytime dain is.i just want to scoop him up in my arms and take care of him.lol
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a chapter! I'm so glad you updated after all this time. I thought you'd abandoned the fic... Anyways, cool chapter - although I don't think any sane 30 year-old gay man would stop in the middle of a making-out session just because of the age gap. But hey, John's just fine like that... ^_^ Yay John!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey guys, it\'s me again. well I have been on \'perseverance\' high for five days now. you DON\'T know what it\'s like. believe me it\'s NOT a pretty feeling. I already know your story by heart and I CRAVE another part. the sole purpose of this review is to beg/bug you to post another chapter. please, please, please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE update or I\'m going to go crazy!
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear authors (I assume there are two of you)!
It\'s been a pure pleasure to read your story. You got me reading your fic for a few hours straight deep in tne night when I should be sleeping fast and sound. Well that\'s not a feat cause I am a fic addict (he he). BUT you know I was reading the story and repeating \"thank you\" - I only do this when the story is amazing - and it was. I still can\'t think of anything besides the characters that you portrayed so well.
First of all when I started reading it I thought \"Oh my God this is gonna be angsty\" as you started rather darkly. To tell the truth I don\'t really fancy angst but the first conversation between Dain and Ry was so funny that I decided to give it a try. After that it only got darker... but I kept reading it none the less as something was telling me this is it, the story I was waiting for. When their relationship started to change I squeeled with joy \"Yay, this is it!\" And I read intently... until I got to the first drinking scene. When Dain started groping poor Ry so... suddenly... well it was so much fun to watch Reilly\'s reaction. Especially that they didn\'t seem to remember it the next day! But when another lemon scene appeared , you know the one with the sofa, I thought \"What the f***? Why are they doing this? (I meant you, dear authors) They built the tension so carefully but the boys are not in the good point to do this NOW! It\'s much too early! Reilly is still too straight to do this. No, they have spoilt a perfect story with a too early lemon scene!\" Just imagine me wailing after the lost tension (and this is what I always treasure the most in the story). But reaching the end of that chapter when it turned out that it was only Dain\'s daydreaming I burst out laughing, feeling suddenly relieved that oh lo and behold the tension was going to be maintained!
After that I was relishing the growing friendship and laughing a bit at the Dain\'s sleepwalking (is it going to play any part in their getting together?) and just mumbling \"thank you\" to myself because with every line I loved this story more and more. Last two chapters were ... wow, just indescribable! You know, Ry suddenly remembering the Friday\'s night and then discovering that he cared for Dain a little more than as a friend. And his doubts and uncertainty... just wow! I love you guys for writing this story the way you did it so far!
I just can\'t wait to read part thirteen and I expect it will be even better than the previous chapters. Am I right in thinking Ry will be jealous (you know about the date Dain is going to have)? Ok, but I will (hopefully) get to know this in the next chappie.
So this is it for now. Sorry if my review bored you to tears but I just couldn\'g get it out of my mind. I want you to know that I appreciate your work and look forward to the update. So till then and be sure I will review. Thanks guys for a bunch of entertainment (is it a good expression anyway?)
It\'s been a pure pleasure to read your story. You got me reading your fic for a few hours straight deep in tne night when I should be sleeping fast and sound. Well that\'s not a feat cause I am a fic addict (he he). BUT you know I was reading the story and repeating \"thank you\" - I only do this when the story is amazing - and it was. I still can\'t think of anything besides the characters that you portrayed so well.
First of all when I started reading it I thought \"Oh my God this is gonna be angsty\" as you started rather darkly. To tell the truth I don\'t really fancy angst but the first conversation between Dain and Ry was so funny that I decided to give it a try. After that it only got darker... but I kept reading it none the less as something was telling me this is it, the story I was waiting for. When their relationship started to change I squeeled with joy \"Yay, this is it!\" And I read intently... until I got to the first drinking scene. When Dain started groping poor Ry so... suddenly... well it was so much fun to watch Reilly\'s reaction. Especially that they didn\'t seem to remember it the next day! But when another lemon scene appeared , you know the one with the sofa, I thought \"What the f***? Why are they doing this? (I meant you, dear authors) They built the tension so carefully but the boys are not in the good point to do this NOW! It\'s much too early! Reilly is still too straight to do this. No, they have spoilt a perfect story with a too early lemon scene!\" Just imagine me wailing after the lost tension (and this is what I always treasure the most in the story). But reaching the end of that chapter when it turned out that it was only Dain\'s daydreaming I burst out laughing, feeling suddenly relieved that oh lo and behold the tension was going to be maintained!
After that I was relishing the growing friendship and laughing a bit at the Dain\'s sleepwalking (is it going to play any part in their getting together?) and just mumbling \"thank you\" to myself because with every line I loved this story more and more. Last two chapters were ... wow, just indescribable! You know, Ry suddenly remembering the Friday\'s night and then discovering that he cared for Dain a little more than as a friend. And his doubts and uncertainty... just wow! I love you guys for writing this story the way you did it so far!
I just can\'t wait to read part thirteen and I expect it will be even better than the previous chapters. Am I right in thinking Ry will be jealous (you know about the date Dain is going to have)? Ok, but I will (hopefully) get to know this in the next chappie.
So this is it for now. Sorry if my review bored you to tears but I just couldn\'g get it out of my mind. I want you to know that I appreciate your work and look forward to the update. So till then and be sure I will review. Thanks guys for a bunch of entertainment (is it a good expression anyway?)
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You guys have to update this story. I love this story...I have to know if Ry will get over on his denial OR how Dain and John's date went. I need more...please. Pretty, pretty pweeeease, Pwwweeeeeeaaassssssee!!!!!! *whinning like a child*
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...(Y)
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey guys... this is getting really really really....upsetting, are you busy with your tests still? Cause I love this story, it's awesome, and I really really want to read more of it soon! pretty pretty pretty please?
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more more more PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please, is there going to be more soon??? I need more, this is a AWESOME story.
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo for chapter 12! i loved it but its so frustrating for the two of them oh my god you guys. Please werite more and soon because .. I er.. don't want them to suffer?? Okay, maybe I just really really really wanna read more and I"ll use any excuse I can find. lols. Update soon!! You guys rock!!!!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was brilliant! I am definately looking forward to the rest of it as so far i have loved every bit of it!