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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...i love this...so good because it gives a good contrast between who he has to be, who he wants to be and who he is...great work. Keep it up:)
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story so far and I was honestly shocked at how well written it was. I ,personally, wouldn’t mind having Sasha attempting to get the truth out of me in fact I think I would hold out on the information for longer period of time \'__\'. Hope you update soon because im in love with this.
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this is a really good story, very well developed so far! I hope you continue it with lots and lots of chapters, lol. But I still need to know WHY IS SHE THERE??????? I am just waiting to find out!
Cant wait for more! Keep up the good work!
Cant wait for more! Keep up the good work!
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW......*deep thoughts*
You better Update soon...
You better Update soon...
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it awesome!! OMG u gotta update plzz
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great start and really hot! i hope there is going to be more! more soon, please!!!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kel - I totally agree... But decided to use some artistic license for the sake of the story ;-) Plus, I\'m sure I didn\'t say for sure that she was a fighter pilot. Perhaps Bosnia is a fabulous place to go on a sightseeing trip? No, I don\'t think so either! *ahem!* Artistic license, that\'s what I say!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is AMAZING!! Could you email me when you update it?
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was hot! I seriously doubt that they\'d let a fighter pilot wear a tongue piercing while on duty, or that a soldier from a third-world country would identify and like it so readily, but other than that little quibble, it was great! Please update soon.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it ya musrt update