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for Hunted

by furbert

person rongski
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! I\'m in love with it. Please continue.
person katt
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written story; as in, oh neat, a writer who doesn\'t leave me thinking this reminds me of something a 9th grader with a C in both English AND creative writing posted, lol. Plus it\'s just good, found myself reading as fast as I could to get more and more. Very brutal, of course, but that\'s not an automatic wrong, except with some people. I\'m working on a story where the main character\'s mother is a street whore back in the 15-16 century era...doesn\'t get much harsher then that.
I loved how you wrote the female character. On the one hand, powerless to resist her sexual weakness in regards to Sasha. And yet strong when trying not to break and answer the questions asked. Spineless females are totally unappealing to me. And as far as that Sasha...man oh man, let\'s just say he\'s totally intense...and I\'m not going there any deeper, smirks. I think I need a cold shower myself though. I hope you\'ll write more on these two, they are well worth the read. Thanks for the pleasure...
person Rachel
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
best fan fic I\'ve read yet, keep up the good work
person andrea
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this...there\'s something with the captive scenario that just *shudders* makes me all tingly...weird because I\'m usualy pretty in control of my life and am all about feminism and girl-power and that sort of stuff but Sasha had me losing it, literaly. I don\'t know if it\'s the forbiden aspect of the whole relationship or if you just depict the scenes so well that he comes across that good, well whatever the reason I really liked your story. You kept true to the characters till the very end and the plot was very refreshing as well, people around here sometimes tend to go to the same overly used themes and explore the same fantasies but you gave the whole Male/dom thing a new twist and I have to say that it turned out great. Anyways, congratulations again on the story and I\'ll be looking forward to your \"not-quite-sequel\"...kuddos
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo... oh man it took me a long time to read but I was not at all disappointed!
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lust.... anything with erotic fucking involved is excellent in my eyes....
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasha sounds hot and fucking sexy..... I think I\'ll imagine him tonight instead of the Phantom from Phantom of the Opera or the Phantom\'s actor, for a change.
person Anon
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it ya must update
person S
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! you cant end it in one more chapter!!!! :(, lol. Keep going...sequel?
person Loopypants
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is incredible! I\'m in love with this story. It\'s perfect. I can\'t see anything wrong with it. Great work. Can\'t wait for the next chap:)

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