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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jelena, I'm sorry you feel that way.
I had no intention of portraying an entire race of people as evil/savages etc, and in reality I don't believe I did.
At no point did I say "All of these people are savages." Also this is a story with a limited number of characters in it. If the perpetrators had been American instead, would you also say I was calling all Americans savages?
I'm sorry again that you were offended, but the summary is quite clear about the nature of the story. I shall say the same thing that we used to say to all the people who complained about what they read on a certain site that stopped hosting NC-17 stories: "If you don't like the content, stop reading. Don't sit and read the whole thing and then moan about it once you've finished."
I had no intention of portraying an entire race of people as evil/savages etc, and in reality I don't believe I did.
At no point did I say "All of these people are savages." Also this is a story with a limited number of characters in it. If the perpetrators had been American instead, would you also say I was calling all Americans savages?
I'm sorry again that you were offended, but the summary is quite clear about the nature of the story. I shall say the same thing that we used to say to all the people who complained about what they read on a certain site that stopped hosting NC-17 stories: "If you don't like the content, stop reading. Don't sit and read the whole thing and then moan about it once you've finished."
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story was well-written I must say, and I /did/ enjoy reading it...
However, it was tainted. My brother died as a Serbian soldier, he was gunned down at a young age, and the way you portrayed the Yugoslavian point of view was as savages. You need to remember to not have a biased view in your stories, and show both sides of the brutality.
I'm sorry, but this story was offending to both me and the memory of my brother.
However, it was tainted. My brother died as a Serbian soldier, he was gunned down at a young age, and the way you portrayed the Yugoslavian point of view was as savages. You need to remember to not have a biased view in your stories, and show both sides of the brutality.
I'm sorry, but this story was offending to both me and the memory of my brother.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this one but i like brutal rape better but the humiliation was cool. Make more!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a really great story!!!!!! Especially the ending LOL!!!!!!!!!!!^^
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that is the ultimate BDSM story. It is so good.
PS...wouldn\'t Suzy be pregnant? Why don\'t you write about that? Because, unless she had a hysterectomy or something, I think it\'s very unlikely that she did NOT become pregnant. Just an idea.
-O. G. See you in MY fics!
PS...wouldn\'t Suzy be pregnant? Why don\'t you write about that? Because, unless she had a hysterectomy or something, I think it\'s very unlikely that she did NOT become pregnant. Just an idea.
-O. G. See you in MY fics!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are very talented, and you have great taste in smut! I love how well you portray a tough woman who also likes being dominated in bed. It\'s great how you show that her sexual desires don\'t detract from her courage and capabilities. rock on keke.
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
er, sorry, zeke. :)
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is good.Like it a lot
LOL
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
)))“I love you,” he murmured, and Suzanne smiled in relief. “Now tell me to fuck you!” he growled, and she did, with pleasure.(((
I REALLY loved that part! Haha! What do you mean by a \'Not-Sequel\'? *shrugs* Oh well, but don\'t stop! This is a fantastic fic! How about how Sasha\'s gotta hide past the guards sinces he\'s at her place (and I\'m pretty sure on the base in that same country). And also where they will stay and whatever future they could have in store for them? After all... both are good military folks... why not some sort of \'free-lance assassins\'? Hit men? Hehe
I REALLY loved that part! Haha! What do you mean by a \'Not-Sequel\'? *shrugs* Oh well, but don\'t stop! This is a fantastic fic! How about how Sasha\'s gotta hide past the guards sinces he\'s at her place (and I\'m pretty sure on the base in that same country). And also where they will stay and whatever future they could have in store for them? After all... both are good military folks... why not some sort of \'free-lance assassins\'? Hit men? Hehe