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I have an account here but I\'m just too lazy to log in. But omg! I am totally LOVING your fic! You HAVE to update soon or I will die. I really love your fic and you\'re an awesome writer. The plot is cool and wanna see where this goes. Please keep it going for a while ^.~

^_^krillball6^_^
^_^Jessi^_^

I love reading stories like these. Hope u update soon caus i cant wait to read what happens next!!

r u going to finish this? Because i\'ve been hooked for a long time and waiting. it\'s really good.

Your story is disturbing.
Dark, demoralising, decadent, debauched & depraved.
but somehow delicious..........

Well, that was arousing (wiggles ass on chair) (sighs) Very interesting characters, excellent descriptive passages, (goes to private place to rub up against corner of some furniture) You are VERY naughty!

yummy. I don\'t go for the swearing dirty word thingy, I guess it\'s okay, but the rest of it was rather animalistic, primitive, erotic, arousing, eloquent, did I say primitive? (Passes out from heart fibrillations)

@3: I had to cross my legs. Nice that he has her all to himself now, although I do miss the torture. I mean, I wouldn\'t want that to happen in reality, but he made himself her only friend, and that\'s kind of twisted, isn\'t it? It\'s like their soul mates, even though there\'s lots of pain. I kept thinking that her cut would make sex kind of painful, not to mention I feel hungry right now, knowing he hasn\'t fed her yet. What is it about men and women that makes us like this? Hormones? Or like I said earlier, a primitive erotic need to well, to fuck?

@4: Ah, how the tables have turned! What\'s next, I wonder. ON to the next exciting chapter, I guess.

@5. That was really well done. I wonder what kind of job they\'d get now that they\'re both deserters...now there\'s a dilemma. (start their own country, or, better yet, \"Welcome to Canada!\"--how to get lost in the wilderness in three easy steps!) I thought the reunion beating was a little overdone, but understandable. Excellent story, and very juicy. Welldone.

Uh...Wha?! I was just getting started and it ended? Well, that's alright. This is really quite...erotic. XD Okay, you've probably been told that already. I have to read everything else you write now. Damn you. I got a bit confused because though you mention country names and names of the characters, I still didn't understand what they looked like. Their world is gray, almost featureless. It works sometimes because this isn't some superhero or fantasy thing. It's very basic and earthy...if violent, but I'd be nice to see a bit of the local architecture and flora. :) I don't think you described what Suzanna looked liked, other than her general body shape and bruises. At least Sasha has dark hair and eyes. I want to know what Suzanna looks like.