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for Hunted

by furbert

person Suzanne
schedule April 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My...This may have been the best story I've read in the years of perusing...oh my. He is deadly hot and she is exceptional. You are an amazing writer and this is by far my favorite of your works. In her words, and yours, "Don't ever stop."
person lisa
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You done an good job with the story. I have to admit I'm not sure where I would like to see it end. I guess with them together.
schedule January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is the most awesome piece of erotica I've ever read. I've never been as excited in my life as when I read this story the first times and it still gets me every time though I've spent years reading it over and over. One of the things that made the strongest impression on me was the categorizing of violence. To me violence was all just plain violence until I read Sasha’s ponderings about beating and rapes being intimate ways to hurt Suzanne compared to the impersonal cutting with a knife. This story is what inspired me to try write some stories of my own for I wanted to see more sex stories like this in the net. I've never read another story with a plot as delicious as in this one. The way you twine together abuse and love until they are one and the same is just magical. You go inside the heads of Sasha and Suzanne and make the most implausible things seem and sound perfectly natural - like her attraction to a cruel, violent man. I'm sorry you haven't written more but this - at least to me - is a story of a lifetime, a time long favorite and the standard which I strive to achieve in my own dabblings. So if you were to write just one story I'm happy you wrote this one.
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Behind Enemy Lines? lol
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, steamy~ Sasha is totally hawt!! It was a very good ending too, but can't help wishing there was more of these two, in the same plot. I'm off to read your other Not-Sequel stories and hope you keep writing.
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
una hermosa historia, muy interesante, ana maria
person kylienna
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely wonderful. i actually had started writing a story like this about a year or two ago so when i saw the summary i was like, mog have to read it! lol i never did finish mine but now i'm wanting to start writing it again. mine is on current events though. sort of NCIS style. I LOVE THAT SHOW! GO ABBY! uhm yeah! anyway! great story! loved it!
person crazygiraffe
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of my all-time favourites! Nice one!
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schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update
person ree
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD!!! that was beyond HOTT!!! this is definitly the hottest story that i have read!!!