schedule
October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An interesting and mysterious start. I noticed some minor grammar at the beginning - the start
of some sentences didn\'t have capital letters - be careful to
re-read your work. I like your writing style and the descriptions were very good.
of some sentences didn\'t have capital letters - be careful to
re-read your work. I like your writing style and the descriptions were very good.
schedule
September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far i hope u update
schedule
September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hope you get better soon so you can update this story. ^_^ *Gives chicken noodle soup?* And remember to drink fluids!