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Crep, yore spellin is bed! you knead to poot in moor parygraphs 2. ai ai ai! I really like the story line. It looks like it may go places. Work harder! the story deserves better. You come off like a three year old trying to tell an adult story, but the story you want to tell from your heart is not what I am wanting to hurt in any way.

I like it so far. It seemed interesting! I hope you continued to write more! :)

yayy i like this story UPDATE SOON! :)

Awww the guy had a rough night huh? Maybe next time you can describe our main gal there? Other than that, love what you have so far.