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Yayy can\'t wait for the next chappy :)) gettin to the good part hehe Update soon!

awesome

Hey!! Don\'t stop there! lol... keep going! It\'s getting REALLY hot!
Well.. My email is up there, anytime you want me to beta something, just gimmie a shout! Can\'t wait to read what you have up your sleeve next (on Any of the stories)!
Bites\'n\'Nibbles

Awsome I absolutly love your story! Please continue it kicks ass

OMG!! He bit her!!! You better have Lance come and kick his butt! LOL
A beta is someone who pre-reads and/or edits your stories for you before you put it up for others to read. You know, kinda like a proof reader! (Not that you need one) but if you would like one, feel free to give me a shout!
Bites\'n\'Nibbles

Keep going! It\'s going really ggod.. can\'t wait to see what happens next! if you need someone to beta, then give me a shout!
Bites\'n\'Nibbles

Haha. Awesome job. Keep up the great work. I LOVE Roses\' Charrie... ~Quote: \"Ill call you Lance, because you are not a prince to me\"~ Haha.. that was the best! Can\'t wait to read the next chappie!
Bites\'n\'Nibbles

Hmm, Rose sounds like a nice person, but she seems a little dumb. I dont know if I would bring a stranger into my house, and I dont know anyone else that would either. She\'s \"too\" nice, get what im saying? Hmmm...Anyways its a good story and everything, you just need to correct a bit of the spelling mistakes, its hard to read cause there are so many. You did good, and thats why I gave you a good rate, and this is a good review wether you think my friendly critasism is bad or not, its merely used to help you a bit. ^_^ Oh yes, and could you email me when the next chapter comes out, I really am curious about what lance will do when she gets back home.

u[dayr

This story is really good. Can\'t wait tell U post other chapters to it. U are a really good writer