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oh... interesting turn of events.... please update soon

Very interesting, I\'ve only read the first chapter and I\'m already enticed. Your writing style is very discribtive, and the way you describe the scenery makes it all the easier to visualize. Other than a few grammer mistakes here and there, its very well written ( I can\'t scold you too much about the grammer considering how bad mine is ...heh...) I\'ll have to read the next bit later, I hope its as good as the begining, and I hope to see more updates.

~Love Torne

again interesting please update again soon

hey...i\'m liking this--- pretty good so far- i\'d really like to see what happens...

interesting update soon

Well we will have to see what happens but I like it.

I\'m intrigued by this story. The first chapter was good, but I agree with what you said, starting is always the hardest part. I hope you continue. I\'d like to see where this goes :)