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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Oh, my god. That was....that was the best first kiss scene I\'ve ever read. Ever. Hands down. No doubt. You win. I...literally...had shivers. That was so awesome, and so perfect.
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jake\'s attitude reminds me of my own. Not that I do not have family it is just nothing special about my birthday and what not. I like how you made him just kind of like who cares type of attitude. I hope you update very soon. Until next time...
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jake\'s attitude reminds me of my own. Not that I do not have family it is just nothing special about my birthday and what not. I like how you made him just kind of like who cares type of attitude. I hope you update very soon. Until next time...
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m becoming more and more attached to this story...and kudos to you for continuing to keep us on the edge of our seats about when they\'re going to finally get together! Sheesh, nine chapters...that\'s gotta be some kind of record. But it\'s remaining excessively realistic, and your characters are so endearing. This is turning out to be one of my favorite stories yet.
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
such suspense. I don\'t know how much more edging around the issue i can take. Why don\'t they just do it already. ok i know that that would defeat the whole point of the story but yeah. it is getting harder and harder not to be disappointed. I love your story. please update again soon.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. bit of a downer though. hope the next one is a little more upbeat just because i hate to see such good people hurting. please update soon.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was such a cute chapter! I love Halloween, but now I have to change my plans (one of my characters in my story was going to dress as the Phantom for Halloween). :( Oh well, you did an excellent job with this, and the story is getting better and better. You\'re creating just the right amount of tension and discomfort between Liz and Jake, and it all seems very natural. Jake\'s reactions are very realistic, and Liz is just adorable. I\'m really anxious to see what happens between them!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what tha....what just happened?? why didn\'t he say something?
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love ur story!!!!! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!! Up-date soon!!!!!!!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update sooner.. You story is one of the better ones here (no offence to anyone else).