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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why do I get a bad feeling about the next chapter. That was a funny chapter though. Crept up on the wrong girl.. At least it wasn\'t like a cop or something.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
@9 hm, I like that he kindof gardens. I can\'t help thinking about this story, I don\'t know why. It seems like nothing really happens, but their relationship is intriguing. Kind of quiet.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"outlandish\", my favorite word. woo! haven\'t seen that one in a long time.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
@1: HA! my dad\'s a packrat too, and I married one. Talk about junkie! (or is that junky?) anyway, I love that your hero doesn\'t wear shorts. I used to wonder about a couple of guys in high school (back in the day) that always wore jeans in the heat of summer. Looking at them made me sweat.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
@6: you aren\'t kidding. One Baby Step at a Time! This is one sweet story, and is painfully realistic. All those nice touches that two shy people go through, it\'s amazing that anything is actuallyhappening. Yay for friends!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing chapters 1-12, you made the most mundane things of life very interesting. I like how real Jake and Liz are. I like how Jake is not exceptionally charming and the way you’ve told the story makes it very natural. Both Liz and Jake didn’t have a good start but you did a good job in slowly building the bond and the awkwardness of the first meeting to the point of being comfortable with each other. It’s such an adorable story, really. Thanks and I can’t wait to read the next chapter.
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read this story since the beginning and am really enjoying it, especially these last few chapters where they\'ve gotten together. But the way you just ended this chapter has me thinking that things are TOO good right now. You\'ll fix that, won\'t you? People in stories can\'t stay happy for too long. Update soon.
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very....sweet...and sensitive....your story is so soft and sensual...i\'m really enjoying this reading experience :)
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! more please! I LOVED this chapter. can\'t wait to read more. finally with the kissing. thank you. please update again soon
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a really nice chapter. I like how he is about his feelings... Christmas is a normal day, same with his birthday and everything else...