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You need to make this right, Eggman. You don't update forever and then you update with this! Not cool! Make it right for Jake and Liz. It only seemed to be a peck he shared with Linda and surely he can explain a peck. But probably not since Liz feels that Jake doesn't care for her as much as she cares for him and Linda did used to be Jake's serious girlfriend. Like I said, make this right. And update soon damn it!

I read this chapter when you first published it, I just have been a bit busy. I really do like this story alot and I hope to see how he explains that one although it was not his fault. What I don't like is that there is such a large space between your updates. (I know you might not be able to help it) It makes me end up having to read the story again almost completely over in order to remember what it was about in detail.

I really love this story alot. I can't wait to see an update for the next chapter I hope it doesn't last long, the wait I mean.

I think you were doing a wonderful job with this story, please start it up again.

This is one of my favorite stories on this site, and I appreciate you telling us why there was a delay in the updates. My condolences on your computer troubles - I think we've all been there at one point or another. We all appreciate the time and effort you put into writing for us. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read more of the story.

Thanks for letting us know Eggman. I think we've all been distracted:) HAPPY NEW YEAR! I wish you good luck, good health and prosperity in 2006.

She is being an idiot. Or is she not? Tis the question to be answered. I really hope you update very soon. I want to know what is going to happen.

Reviewing chapter 14, Alice is funny. I can understand Liz's insecurity. We all have those moments. I don't think Liz should doubt her relationship with Jake because he wasn't the cheater. I wouldn't want to be in Liz's shoes because she has to work with Jake's ex. That would be so awkward. Your stories and others on this website and going to movies is my escapism from this institution I call school. I think it's more like an insane asylum here. Cool you’re not a movie goer. Hey, whatever floats your boat. I like that saying sorry, I'll stop typing now before I type something really stupid. Thanks for updating.

Reviewing chapter 13, hey Eggman you’ve updated your one special person, no joke, sorry I’m just in a really good mood. I can’t wait to see Pride and Prejudice myself but personally I would have to recommend Walking the Line. I am not a fan of country music but it is a very well told story. I really like Jake’s character. What he did was embarrassing and he does deserve a slap in the face but it was pretty funny. Oh no, Liz is still insecure do I smell trouble in future chapters. Thanks for updating.

aww... i really like this fic :)
great job