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for One Step at a Time

by Stalwart

person aquamum
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful, wonderful story.
I\'ve been reading all 17 chapters all weekend...
This is one of THE BEST romances on this website.
I\'m hooked....

person Victoria
schedule March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story yesterday and I love it. I can\'t wait until you update again.
person Shanna
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I have no ideas how he can het Liz back. I can'y wait to read yours. Good Chapter. Please update soon.
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VERY VERY VERY good. I liked this chapter. I wonder what Jake is gonna do to try and get her back. Please update soon.
Isa
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally understand what you mean. I need distractions constantly if I'm not studying or doing something for school then I'll think about our messed up world, my ex who wants to be "friends", the nuns who wants me to join the convent, life as a girl, wanting to kill the girl downstairs from me because she keeps blasting "My hump, my lovely lady hump, check it out", etc. hahaha. Okay, sorry Eggman back to reviewing scene 16, I don't know if I'm high on something but I found this chapter really funny. Jake is adorable and why you ask because he is going to find something exceptionally brilliant to get Liz back that's why. Liz and Jake shouldn't be so stubborn this is love after all, hehe. Thanks for updating.
person Shanna
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was worth the wait. Keep up the good work.
person Sara
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have to update soon!! You can't leave it haning like that this long...update please!! Ü
person blondiexoxo
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg why did u stop there that is so nnot cool well i hope u write a sequel or somethin
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, you've updated scene 15! Wow it's a long chapter too so it's all good. Jake actually made me laugh. Man, why did Liz have to witness that stupid kiss if you could even call it that. Why can't Linda just leave with just a hug. I hate girls sometimes and I'm one of them. Mr. Nonchalant Jake better go find Liz and explain everything to her. Thanks for updating.
person LKN
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading all 16 chapters and I like it. Please update again soon. I really want to see how she reacts and what happens between the two. Thanks for posting.