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for CaNdY

by Torne

person Layla
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story, I would have revied eriler but I wanted to read everything there was first. I really love what you have done with Candy, her personality and the "powers" she has, she really is an enjoyable character. I awate your next chapter excitidly.

~Layla
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story, and the characters. Everything's original and well thought out. You're writing style is well formed, and everything reads pretty smoothly. I just kind of wish the chapters were a little longer, but that's cool. Good writing and please update!
person SeanKen
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading the story, and I really like what you have here. The concept is interesting and from what I've read so far the plot is captivating. I just noticed a few grammatical and stylistic things, which I would change, and if you want me to point those out I will.
person chanda
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL... your bad... Thank you... I just love this story... yeah she and Ice.. wow.. that was very well written... and even if you email me the chapters I will still review... Yes shame on people its not that hard to write a simple review... this review has taken all of 30 seconds out of my life... OH no what am I going to do...

Anyway until next time,
Chanda
person chanda
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg... I do hope you get better, and glad you survived the hurricane...

Well for having all that *Shit* happen to you... glad you could take time and update...Thank you.

Another wonderful well written, calm...lol chapter...

Take care of yourself girl...
Chanda....

ps: And you say I leave a nasty cliffy....LMAO.... talk to you later.
person chanda
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nasty cliffy at that... LOL...This story has truely been non stop, and it keeps me on the edge of my seat...

WTG!!

Until the next chapter,
Chanda

person chanda
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg another tense chapter, I cant believe Mike is dead.... Oh please update soon...

Chanda
person chanda
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens...oh boy hurry update...LOL to intense...

Thank you.

I will try to get the next chapter up soon, keep up the excellent writing...
Chanda
person DarkWizardKiller
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank You for the glowing review of my story. Your an awsome writer in your own right! Very cool and very original. You\'ve got a wicked inagination! Well done! If it were a book. I would buy it!
person Ashylen
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe.....Its great so far....must read more and more and more and more and more and more and more and more and more and more...well I\'m sure you get the point.
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