rate_review Reviews

Yay! The next chapter...oooh! Fluffy! I loooves you! It\'s adorable. Lexis has a personality! No longer the little slave, but a personality of his own...yet still perfectly irresistable! And I love the narrator...he\'s hilarious. *smirk* You have a great way of giving life to your writing! I hope to see more soon!

Sure been loving this! I\'d leave a longer review as well, but I\'m catching that same darned cold.

Actually.. it\'s a relief to find someone with such a nice, simple, and easily read author\'s voice. I certainly hope we see more of your works! They\'re all marvelous! (Read every one in one sitting! I couldn\'t help it!) You really allow the story to just take it\'s own course, but you\'re careful not to linger and thus let things get too moldered, nor are you rushing everyone through it all. Brilliantly done! Looking forward to all the rest you do and share!

(soghes dreamily) How sweet in a cynical sort of way! ^^lol I just love the guy\'s additude! ^^ He\'s hilarious! And Alexi? sooooooooo kawaii!!!!!!!! ^^lol

And it ends again! :gonk: Why...why must it end? I want more... :ninja: I will keep a permanent eye out for anything by you! Your work is terrific as always!

I really like the tone of voice you use with this piece. It flows beautifully and really captures your main character. I also love your character descriptions, their physical attributes as well as their movements and such. I can\'t wait for the next part!

Eeep! It\'s not finished! :gonk: I want more...:ninja: More more more more...T_T Pwease??? It was awesome! I love your writing stlye.

Fascinating! I just love this story. Vibrant characters, a unique world, and a masterfully sarcastic narrative. And daemons! I couldn\'t ask for anything more. I really look forward to reading the next chapter!

its cute you should keep on wrinting it ^.^

Wow! I\'m surprised someone hasn\'t reviewed your story before now. I like it. Your writing flows along smoothly and it\'s interesting. I want to read more about the main character and the ruby-eyed daemon. Hope you post another chapter really soon.