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by MakaiKitty

person Michelle
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hadn't checked your aff account yet but I'm glad I did. I really liked this story and it brought tears to my eyes when Alexis was crying tears of joy. I don't know if I was sad or happy but I did have tears. Your wording is amazing and you still have the ability to draw me into your stories so well. I wish I were as good a writer as you are.

Michelle
person Lily
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ i must say i love your fic! i stumbled across it accidentally and decided to read it anyways. i don't normally read fantasy fics, but i'm awfully glad i read yours! i loved it! it was so cute *nods* i'm definitly gonna read all your other fics! keep writing! <3 hehe Lexi is too cute >.<
person Bard's Apprentice
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*insane squees & clapping*
just - that was - it - just WOW! u are an amazing author! the characters, the plot, almost everything seemed perfectly planned out & were deliciously real (even if Shayne's thoughts were a bit repetative at times ^_~)

u don't mind if i pimp this fic around to my friends, do u?
goooooood. *evil grin*
person aurora
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute cute cute *sigh*very well written...I'm a sucker for funny dialogue (internal and external) made me laugh thanx for sharing now i need to take my ass to bed so i can get up on time for work...maybe I'll read the story one more time first.
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh. I read this awhile ago...but I just now realized I never reviewed after reading the end! I want you to know I think it was perfect. The whole time it was a lead-up, and you know you got to have a good ending...you did terrific! It\'s so well written, and fits both characters so well! I always love happy endings. The warm and fuzzy feeling! ^_^ It lasted for a long time after reading this. Beautiful. Thank you so much for posting here! I always love reading your works. I appreciate your update on Percived Perceptions as well! Keep it up!
person moe
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think this is the most beautiful of all your wonderful stories. :)
person MultifacetedTune
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aawww~!!! *turns into a pile of mush* That was sooooooo cute!!! I loved it!!! ^^ Very well written, with excellent details and characterizations -- keep up the good work!!!
person Doll\'sEyes
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story was sweet and sexy and fun! I have to agree with Shayne that Victor didn\'t seem to be as much of a scumball as he did in the first chapter. That was a good twist and I liked the happy ending. I\'ll be looking for your other stories. Oh, and I\'m glad my reviews encouraged you - you\'re welcome.
person moonstar
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeep! You\'ll finally be finished! O_O I can\'t wait to read the end! Wheee! I\'ll be waiting. *nod nod* And such a cliffhanger by the way... :gonk:
person Doll\'sEyes
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the interactions between Shayne and Lexi. Such a cute pair! Hope Shayne goes and kicks Victor\'s vampire butt and finds out what is wrong with Lexi. Maybe Lexi is changing or evolving in someway? Excellent story. Keep up the good work and post again soon.