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by MakaiKitty

schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was damn good.
person Kuromei
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I lovelovelove this story! XD And because I read "Somewhere in Between" first, I don't think Victor's such a bastard. He's just being the "noble" vampire he was raised to be. :3
person Aleks
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really great story!!!!!
person L1z
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW. Too cute...just too cute. I'm going to go read more of your stories now...and hope they're as adorable as this one. I'm a sucker for the sap.
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!
person k
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story! I really like it. Keep up the good writing!
person Lania
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a cute story... Keep it up!
person S. Novak
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries* Oh my God. I love you so much! It is currently 2:04 AM and I just finished this and I have been brought to tears! I am tempted to have my boyfriend read this.... good thing he's bi, huh? I love you... Truly, I do. Please write more about Shayne and Alexis, or at least about daemons. Because you ROCK at it. This is the BEST story I have read EVER! And I've read a lot of books and fanfics and stories. This one tops them all! I loved Victor too (the boyfriend is so gonna know why), he pissed me off and yet I just wanted to go give him a big hug in the end. Victor: the Matchmaker.... he could get business cards! *sighs* I just LOVED the ending line. I loved the opening line as well. Very creative, very catchy, definately what made me keep reading. All in all your plot was solid and everything was very well written. I only spotted some things that I would have written differently or done differently (you never told us what Shayne looked like). The wording may have seemed different to me because we don't live in the same area (that I know *wink wink*) and your prose is a lot different than mine. But I loved your story, and I love you, and if anyone ever tells you that you aren't a good writer, you send them my way. I'll give them just what's coming to them!

S. Novak
person Lily
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ i cannot get enought of your stories! i've got to have read fate over at least 6 times! hehe you're and awsome writer! i hope you write another story soon!
person Baka-Kitty-Chan
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your fic rocks! i hardly ever review fics :P im such a lazy person. But i feel in love with your fic at 1st chapter! it's awsome! And so is your other fic chance.