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for Chance

by MakaiKitty

schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Wow, that was sooo good! What a great first story to post; you\'re definitely off to a wonderful start. HOTNESS!!!! I\'m really looking forward to anything you write in the future. Keep up the fabulous work!

P.S.- You deserve treats for that cute little play-on-words with the name at the end! *hands you chocolate chip cookies* =^.^=
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely written! Your descriptions were quite vivid and sensual. Rabbit boys have never been a particular fetish of mine, but you make long ears and a puffy tail seem very sexy indeed! And I really liked the wordplay in the last line, about taking a chance when he leaves the inn. Clever. I hope this is the first of many pieces that you post here.

Love,
Falcon

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