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for Chance

by MakaiKitty

person blueesky200
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story, would love a sequel
person Sekre
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww, cute - a porny d/s way =DDDDD
person blisblop
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The boy sounds stunning.I love shota.Yaoi shota.You write well and have excellent taste.
person myladymystere
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I looked you up to find your stories and so far I'm loving them all. You have a wonderful style of writing that is very enjoyable. I loved how his name was Chance and how you worded the end. Don't stop writing !!!!
person drake220
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot and sweet. Really well done. The descriptions, the characters and everything was just great. nice job!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute and well done -- I really enjoyed this!!!
person Siarra
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How dare you even suspect that this wonderful fic might suck? Your writing style is very poetic and beautiful, giving the whole story a very nice, sensual feel. The descirptions give the reader wonderful imagery the whole time, and the characters are extremely endearing. Vincents strong but gentle approach to his precious bunny, and I can\'t see how anyone could not love little Chance... The only even slightly negative things were a few minor misspellings and the fact that Vincent seemed to have magically disappearing clothing.
person Rhia
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, please write more.
person moonstar
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Though I love all your stories...I think this one is my favorite so far. You have such a way of describing that can make him adorable, perfectly innocent, and sexy beyond belief at the same time. I love it! Bunny boys...never seen them so well described before! You\'re an inspiration to me. ^.^ Write more soon!
person lddurham
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really cute. I liked the descriptions of your characters and the overall theme of the fic. Very nice. Thank you!

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