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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww I\'m beginning to really like Devon ! A true diamond in the rough ;-)
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh this was a very good chapter please update again soon
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww they\'re REALLY cute together!! Too bad for Brent *sigh* he should realize something is up soon! Geez. Love your sarcasm!
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heyy... nice that you update so often^^
yes i write too .. but as you noticed, i\'m not very good in english .. at least at writing, but i can understand it very well ^__^.. but that\'s because i\'m from austria and therefore i write in german xD... but not posting on this site^^
ok ... so those people are really crazy .. in fact they remind me of the real life. i mean this cassie just takes advantage of her situation ... she wants brent for herself .. going behind her best friends back, not nice but the truth..
as always ... pls update soon! this story has become my daily news paper or something like that *lol*... i\'m addicted xDD
bye bye
yes i write too .. but as you noticed, i\'m not very good in english .. at least at writing, but i can understand it very well ^__^.. but that\'s because i\'m from austria and therefore i write in german xD... but not posting on this site^^
ok ... so those people are really crazy .. in fact they remind me of the real life. i mean this cassie just takes advantage of her situation ... she wants brent for herself .. going behind her best friends back, not nice but the truth..
as always ... pls update soon! this story has become my daily news paper or something like that *lol*... i\'m addicted xDD
bye bye
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am a very, very bad reviewer! I\'m so sorry I haven\'t been reviewing this story. It\'s not because I don\'t like it - I love it! I think Breanna and Devon are complicated characters, and this story is really showing a growth in your writing ability. The story is interesting, the characters are flawed, and I\'m not sure what\'s going to happen in the end. All in all, it\'s enthralling. Can\'t wait to read more, and I promise to review more often from now on!
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww...these two are just so cute!!!! Another exquisite chapter!!! Will stay glued to \'puter for more...you got me hooked!!!
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this story immensely. The dialogue is so delicious, and...real. I\'m really impressed with the way you\'re writing is evolving and I can\'t wait to see where this goes, and what other stories you\'ll come out with :)
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh very good please update soon I wish to see how this game turns out for them
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cool story and i love the characters ;)
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been getting really frustrated, as my computer hasn\'t been working for a week or so, and I couldn\'t come on here to read this story. But I\'m all caught up now, and I gotta say, this is such a good story. I\'m getting really caught up in the characters and it\'s such a good contrast to your first story. I\'m really really enjoying it. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!