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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haven\'t read this last chapter yet. (Taking a break from studying for an exam! haha This story is my procrastination!!!) Your story totally kicks ass! I almost feel as stange as Bre feels about the entire situation with her and Devon. The internal POV really gives a first hand in sight to EXACTLY what they\'re thinkin! Love it and keep up the great work!
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh and the plot thickens!!! ok somebody get me a thesarus(did I spell that right? lol!) ok anyway I know I\'ve said this already, but I think this story is beautiful...and I gotta tell you I think this story IS my FAVORITE I\'ve read on AFF...ooohh damn that reminds me I gotta add it to my favorites!!! -Kaye
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uuuuuuuuh .. everyone has always left him? huh? wonder what that means ... and he won\'t let anybody come close again?? .. this story is just great!!
well update soon .. i know you will!! ^_______^
xD
well update soon .. i know you will!! ^_______^
xD
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well .. i started one or two stories in englis, but i don\'t have the time .. really ...
so .. that chapter was amazing!! even if i had to laugh at the chapter\'s name so hard that i fell off my chair (which happende really ... stupif chair, my backside still hurts) .. the contet was very interesting and i was very pleased that you didn\'t write the lemons .. i man, sure they are nice and so .. but sometimes it looks better without them^^
no you made me very curious. not only about what will happen between them further, but what happend with his past? where are his friends and why doesn\'t he like to talk about them?? hmmm .. very misterious ... just my case!! ^___^
can\'t weit to read more... and the next chapter sounds appealing!
greets from vienna!!^^
bye bye
so .. that chapter was amazing!! even if i had to laugh at the chapter\'s name so hard that i fell off my chair (which happende really ... stupif chair, my backside still hurts) .. the contet was very interesting and i was very pleased that you didn\'t write the lemons .. i man, sure they are nice and so .. but sometimes it looks better without them^^
no you made me very curious. not only about what will happen between them further, but what happend with his past? where are his friends and why doesn\'t he like to talk about them?? hmmm .. very misterious ... just my case!! ^___^
can\'t weit to read more... and the next chapter sounds appealing!
greets from vienna!!^^
bye bye
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sex on a playground eh? What an interesting idea....
I loved how this chapter went into slightly explaining Devon\'s state of mind. I really like him, mainly because he\'s rather complex and it will be fun to figure him out. He and Breanna are, ironically, a perfect match in my opinion. They are both looking for the same thing, something different....something to help them disconnect from the reality they exist in.
Sorry I haven\'t been so dilligent in reviews....life isn\'t treating me very well, neither is work or school. Your story is always a glimmer of light amongst the entropy though, so thanks. I will try to review when I can...I promise!
You\'re awesome, rock on!
I loved how this chapter went into slightly explaining Devon\'s state of mind. I really like him, mainly because he\'s rather complex and it will be fun to figure him out. He and Breanna are, ironically, a perfect match in my opinion. They are both looking for the same thing, something different....something to help them disconnect from the reality they exist in.
Sorry I haven\'t been so dilligent in reviews....life isn\'t treating me very well, neither is work or school. Your story is always a glimmer of light amongst the entropy though, so thanks. I will try to review when I can...I promise!
You\'re awesome, rock on!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay :) Another chapter. I love the mysteriousness of Devon, very interesting. Can\'t wait for some skeletons to come out the closet. Oh, and I love that Counting Crows song :D It\'s ace.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! Beautiful!!!! :::refuses to leave computer::: lol
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stunning. Stunning chapter. Stunning use of lyrics. Stunning descriptors, stunning inner conflict. I didn\'t think it was possible, but I believe this is shaping up to be better than Everything You Want.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter i loved it a lot...and yea i scare lots of ppl...........MWHAHAHAHA!......................BOO!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice couple of chapters! I\'m excited to find out what D\'s mystery regarding his family is, and to see what actually happens when everyone finds out the truth about B/D (as they always do). And just so you know, I really like and feel bad for B\'s boyfriend, even though I also like the B/D pairing. See, you are a good, complex, involving writer!