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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God bless catastrophe. Damn does it feel good to be healthy. Sinus Infections aren\'t fun!
Just finished reading the chapters I missed and I must say...awesome! I\'m really liking how this story is going. I especially liked that little scene between Bre and her mother. Rebellion is sexy! And Cas and Brent..hmm...I smell a double scandal here (That might be my dinner burning though, now that I think about it). Of course, every situation has two faces, right?
Keep on rockin on!
You get cookies!
Just finished reading the chapters I missed and I must say...awesome! I\'m really liking how this story is going. I especially liked that little scene between Bre and her mother. Rebellion is sexy! And Cas and Brent..hmm...I smell a double scandal here (That might be my dinner burning though, now that I think about it). Of course, every situation has two faces, right?
Keep on rockin on!
You get cookies!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi .. i think you made a small mistake by the responses of the reviews... i think it was actually anon who cracked you up and me who suggested three days grace xDDDD
ok ... so this chapter was very good, like every other too, she learned something very important in life ..to stand her interessts and mind, to be able to hold an argument, though it\'s not nice and to fight for her own! ^__^ somethink i learned ery soon, i\'m not a rebell ... my mom just says that\'s very difficult to tell me something when i\'m always ojecting and verbaly fighting ^^\"
wow ^__^.. never though you would know these bands, because .. well most people i know are just like: \"sugar-what?\" or \"who the fuck is going to greece for three days?\" .. if you understand, they .. just don\'t know them
ok ... sooooo .. i\'m really tired, school was soooooo tiring, i nearly fell asleep, but my techer kept shouting .. so i will go now,
just update xDD pls!^^
ok ... so this chapter was very good, like every other too, she learned something very important in life ..to stand her interessts and mind, to be able to hold an argument, though it\'s not nice and to fight for her own! ^__^ somethink i learned ery soon, i\'m not a rebell ... my mom just says that\'s very difficult to tell me something when i\'m always ojecting and verbaly fighting ^^\"
wow ^__^.. never though you would know these bands, because .. well most people i know are just like: \"sugar-what?\" or \"who the fuck is going to greece for three days?\" .. if you understand, they .. just don\'t know them
ok ... sooooo .. i\'m really tired, school was soooooo tiring, i nearly fell asleep, but my techer kept shouting .. so i will go now,
just update xDD pls!^^
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi again! i just looked at the reviews, i don\'t know why the last one (three days grayce) seems to from anon .. it\'s definately mine and i NEVER wrote that name there ô.Ô
actually the review with the tree is also mine^^ .. but well, from the other chapter xD
ok .. pointless, little side review, just wanted to tell ... i\'m still wondering why there\'s written anon .. huh ...mmmmmhhh ... ?!
well, update please (oh and the review above is also for this chapter ^___^)
actually the review with the tree is also mine^^ .. but well, from the other chapter xD
ok .. pointless, little side review, just wanted to tell ... i\'m still wondering why there\'s written anon .. huh ...mmmmmhhh ... ?!
well, update please (oh and the review above is also for this chapter ^___^)
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh i got it! uuuuuuuuuups! just forgot to sign my name ... *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh* ok the last one was also from me *lol*
im sooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorrrrry, at least you have more reviews now^^ .... mmmmh ... i\'m sooo stupid, well ..hope your not very angry ... you can delete them anyway ^___^\" sry again for the last three reviews (well the first one\'s to the story .. so it\'s right) ... sry again!!!!
im sooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorrrrry, at least you have more reviews now^^ .... mmmmh ... i\'m sooo stupid, well ..hope your not very angry ... you can delete them anyway ^___^\" sry again for the last three reviews (well the first one\'s to the story .. so it\'s right) ... sry again!!!!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry I didn\'t get to review last chapter!!! All I gotta say is YOU ROCK!!! Excellent job! As always, eagerly awaiting more!!!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the web you are weaving for these characters. All of them are ver complex, and have a great depth because of the way you write!!! Very unique...and great!!!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"daddy\'s gonna kill Ralphie!\"...\"Now sweetheart, I promise daddy is not going to \'kill\' Ralphie\"
am I right?...I\'ve been reading this story all along and figured i owed you a review...great story...keep it coming!!
am I right?...I\'ve been reading this story all along and figured i owed you a review...great story...keep it coming!!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh very good please update again soon. also since I\'ve never seen that movie so I will have to guess at it and I say was it the scene with her dancing or was it with her and her fight between her mom??? Anyway, since I didn\'t see the show I couldn\'t really say but guess so all I can say for now is very good and please update again soon
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well .. somehow, i don\'t know why exactly, i loved this chapter. maybe because it showed them in a non sexual way, in a way where they care about each other .. got to know things about it ech other .. they seemed just like a couple ... anyways, it\'s one of my favourite chapters . . .
can\'t wait to read the next one!!
ps: hey, just a suggestion .. most of my friends which like sugarcult also listen to three days grace .... do you know that band?? personally i think one of their best songs is \'i hate everything about you\' (there are good lines in it too ^__^) .. well you don\'t have to hear it or so .. just wanted to say....
can\'t wait to read the next one!!
ps: hey, just a suggestion .. most of my friends which like sugarcult also listen to three days grace .... do you know that band?? personally i think one of their best songs is \'i hate everything about you\' (there are good lines in it too ^__^) .. well you don\'t have to hear it or so .. just wanted to say....
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that\'s going to drive me nuts. I\'m now going to re-read the chapter and see if I can spot it (I know every line from that movie by heart, but I didn\'t notice anything right away).
Anyway, to the review: I love how Cassandra\'s point of view is remaining a tad ambiguous. You don\'t know if she\'s going to do anything about it or not...you don\'t know if she\'s eventually going to risk her friendship with Breanna...very cool dynamic there.
Also, I REALLY love how, in spite of his developing feelings for Breanne, you haven\'t taken away any of the asshole-ness of his character. Even though he\'s ever-changing internally, externally he\'s remained constant - just like he has been in Breanna\'s life! Really well done, and thanks for the reviews on my story!
Anyway, to the review: I love how Cassandra\'s point of view is remaining a tad ambiguous. You don\'t know if she\'s going to do anything about it or not...you don\'t know if she\'s eventually going to risk her friendship with Breanna...very cool dynamic there.
Also, I REALLY love how, in spite of his developing feelings for Breanne, you haven\'t taken away any of the asshole-ness of his character. Even though he\'s ever-changing internally, externally he\'s remained constant - just like he has been in Breanna\'s life! Really well done, and thanks for the reviews on my story!