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Very good please update when you can

Thanks for the QUICK updates and don\'t worry about posting, just do it when you can. Just don\'t leave it unfinished :)

Yeah!!! Bre got a job!!!! :::sniggers::: \"bitchtastic\" I love it!!!!!

oh very interesting I wonder what will happen next please update soon

oh .. yeah, this time the first thing i did is sign in^^

ok i liked this chapter too, even though the main characters weren\'t here that much, it showed the aspect of the other .... bre lived an illusion and her friends were and now that she is finally living her life, she makes most people around her sag .... but that\'s always so, changes are never something to handle easily .. i just hope that in the end everyone will be happy... \'cause i\'m really feeling with them xD

can\'t wait to read the next chapter!!!!
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oh I wonder what\'s gonna happen next bre has a lot of explaining to do to brent and them but most importantly will cassie actually tell brent before Bre does???

this story is absolutely incredible..i started reading and i couldnt stop, and i was so into it, i read it so fast i had to go back a few times. this is one of the few stories that actually kinda turns me on while im reading it, not too many stories do that. i LOVE this, keep up the fantastic work.

This story is still going strong. I love the character development for each person - Breanna slowly gaining independence, Devon slowly opening up - both without giving up who they are at their cores. I also like that Cassandra (?) isn\'t just a generic \'bad guy\' as I feared she might be, that she has feelings too. And once again, the boyfriend (Brent?) is still coming off as sweet and naive. I do get the feeling, though, that B/D are getting a little sloppy - dancing at school? Such a chance that they\'ll be seen, even after hours! Or are they starting to reach that \'hoping to be caught\' faze? Can\'t wait to see what happens next!

EEEP!

I found it!

\"Mommy\'s gonna KILL Ralphie!\"

Is that it? I hope so, or I just made an ass of myself. Anyway, fantastic chapter, once again. Breanna\'s continuing deception regarding Brent is very realistic, as are Brent\'s suspicions. Oh, and I can\'t WAIT to see where things go between Cassandra and Brent. I also love how Devon wasn\'t actually in this chapter, but he is a strong enough character that his presence was definitely there. Does that make sense?

Gah, whatever. I just hope that my characters can be as well-developed as yours. And thank you SOOO much for the shameless plug! I can\'t express how much I appreciate it.

Er....\"Daddy\'s gonna KILL Ralphie!\"

Yeah. I guess I made an ass out of myself anyway! Haha!