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for Falling For You

by foamyfan15010

person Sorin Kain
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy SHIT! THIS IS THE GREATEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ ON THIS SIGHT!!! HHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLL YEAH!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!! MORE CHAPTERS DAMNIT!!!
person Arainaina
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good please update soon... this is getting very good and I can\'t wait to see what happens
person Sara
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter espec the miscommunication between the two.... MAYBE you could put in the next chapter how Devon noticed Breanna\'s smile wasn\'t real but the smile she usually puts on for other people, he could confront her with that maybe? Just a suggestion i don\'t know...

Anyway don\'t worry about taking time over chapters, I\'d rather have something well developed than a chapter rushed just to keep posting. Oh and i hope things are getting better for you!!!
person me myslef and i
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh God!! i was totally ok with no brent and cassie .. not that i mind them that much, but for me this story is more about devon and bre ... so i had no problem at all^^

this bitch!!! (zoey) .. i mean maybe there was something true in her words but some of it was just fuck jelous bullshit! sorry... but i don\'t like her at all ... for now!!

*jumps* yeah!! bre admitted it to herself!! .. can\'t wait till the day she admitts i loudly to everyone .. especially one boy ..hehe ... well hope you update soon!!! i really missed my daily amount of this story *sigh*

Lg, bye bye
person Angel
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can honestly say I think I hate Zoey... What a BITCH! Bre is right Zoey does not have the right to judge her or her actions based on what ASSUMES Wow what a bitch! When is Devon gonna realize it!! And why doesn\'t Bre just break up with Brent!! It\'s not the same love shes feeling! my goodness.
person Tirch
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW they were getting sloppy! It\'s so frustrating that they won\'t tell each other what they are thinking (although it is very realistic). And I still feel bad for Brent - he really is an innocent victim in this situation. Is he going to get some happiness in this story? Please?
person Angel
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uuuuuupdate? hehe I love this story! Sorry to hear about the increase work load!
person Angel
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww It\'s cool. Good luck with your stuff!
person me myself and i
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok ... so once a week .. is really .. well ... sad?! but if you say you have your reasons than it is so .. still i would miss it and propably go crazy xDD
OMG!!! she knows her secret? .. well ok .. but why does she hate her then??? that\'s not logical .. there must be something else behind it .. now, or??
ok .. pls update as soon as possible, i\'m waiting!!!
LG
person me myself and i
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you don\'t have to response as long as i can read the chapters!!! .. thats far more important xDD

ok ... it\'s sooooooooooooooooooooo sweet the way bre and dev are aound each other ... and the part, where this brian mentioned something about devon being her boyfriend was sooo ... hah it got a smile on my face ^__^

seems like devon already feels more about her and knows it too!! but it\'s kinda sa that they are in this twisted position ...

ok so pls pls pls update soooon!! because .. i wanna know if this zoey(?) knows about bre and devon!! tha is very important .. and also why she hates bre that much?!?!? ..

lg