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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh steamy. Hehe I\'m liking this story more and more every chapter. It seems that the story has changed from Meet The Beaver to The OC (minus the crappy teenie drama). All the sexy and awkward lust, a captivating web of characters (some of them at least) and catholic school girls!
Awesome as usual!
Rock on!
Awesome as usual!
Rock on!
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really rather interesting, and you have piqued my interest. Now please hold my interest and I will be patient for updates. :) Keep up the hard work, ~Moon-Daisuki
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was very sexy indeed...however, I felt that perhaps it had happened a little too fast. I know that was the point, but perhaps a tiny bit more development between them before thrusting them into one another\'s arms might have made it a bit more believable. However, I have a feeling that you have a damn good reason for doing things just the way you did...plus, you made us wait so long in EYW for some action, I probably shouldn\'t complain, huh? Very well-written chapter. I love the idea of sexual rendezvous in the classroom. Hehe.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*phew* good then i\'m excited! devon sounds absolutely yummy *rawr*
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I smell trouble... (Oh and I am a guy. Only brought this up because the way you said relate to breanna or however you spell it, in my mind made me think that you thought that I was a girl..)
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm Devon is rather...interesting. I like him, of course that\'s just my inner gay guy talking. Devon\'s character has yet to be determined though. I won\'t pass judgement or apporval on him him just yet (damn, I sound like a parent). He seems like quite a \"forthcoming\" kinda guy, one who puts all his cards on the table if you know what I mean. I can\'t wait (hint hint) for the next chapter.
As always, you\'re awesome.
Rock on!
As always, you\'re awesome.
Rock on!
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great. i hope that you continue soon because i am very intrigued.
yours truly,
cope
yours truly,
cope
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The way this story\'s going you certainly won\'t disappoint! Damn, Devon sounds like a hottie. Hmm, sexy bad boys. Love \'em. Loving this story btw. Looking forward to more chapters :)
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is this one going to be a happy ending? oh god i hope so...E.Y.W. made me cry
update soon!!!!!!!!!!
update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who dies this time? Her...no...her boyfriend..nope, already been done......her dog? Just kidding, just kidding.
Can you say puke? If that family was even an smidgeon more like Meet The Beavers I probably would have screamed. Too much perfection and goody goody stuff!
Anyway, awesome so far. I love how you pay such strict attention to character development, it helps, well me at least, assimilate the story better and get into it better.
Keep on rockin\' on.
(Will we be able to possibly get pictures for this one?)
Can you say puke? If that family was even an smidgeon more like Meet The Beavers I probably would have screamed. Too much perfection and goody goody stuff!
Anyway, awesome so far. I love how you pay such strict attention to character development, it helps, well me at least, assimilate the story better and get into it better.
Keep on rockin\' on.
(Will we be able to possibly get pictures for this one?)